Xeno:
Love this heavy buildup
Lil:
food is very important! excellent way to end it.
Invitational Tournament 2022, Round 2 / Sybil vs. Maple and Lily
Critiques & Comments
# 6
Posted:
Apr 6 2022, 03:52 AM
# 5
Posted:
Apr 5 2022, 10:46 AM
These were fun to read!
Awesome one weekers!
Awesome one weekers!
# 4
Posted:
Apr 5 2022, 02:53 AM
Xeno: It seems 2022 is not slacking in terms of giving out hardships to people who do not deserve it. In spite of your setbacks, I think this comic is more clearer and easier to read than your round 1.
Lil: You put out a good and short comic again. I don't really have much in the way of a formal critique, my apologies.
Lil: You put out a good and short comic again. I don't really have much in the way of a formal critique, my apologies.
# 3
Posted:
Mar 31 2022, 07:22 PM
-XENO: Hey life happens- I am loving this set up and how much atmosphere you were able to induce into each shot. I also love that 2nd-to-last panel, such a cool illustration all on it's own. So sick. I hope to see more Sybil in the future, she's so cool !
-LIL DRAWINS: Your inks are so solid and I love the choice to have Sybil's string act as a pop of color!! That SFX too though! It's so well incorporated into the art!!! Fantastic job. Maple and Lily are such a great duo!!
-LIL DRAWINS: Your inks are so solid and I love the choice to have Sybil's string act as a pop of color!! That SFX too though! It's so well incorporated into the art!!! Fantastic job. Maple and Lily are such a great duo!!
# 2
Posted:
Mar 31 2022, 07:15 AM
Tea parties and picnics oh my!
Xeno I very much enjoyed the "EXTEND THE PINKIE" line hahahaha
Lil- once again your art is fantastic! Loved the final panel
Xeno I very much enjoyed the "EXTEND THE PINKIE" line hahahaha
Lil- once again your art is fantastic! Loved the final panel
# 1
Posted:
Mar 31 2022, 07:07 AM
XENO: A very creative payoff to your plot here and your art conveys it very cleanly. However, I think it might help you to write your comic text in all caps and to practice using a diamond shape for your speech bubbles.
LIL_DRAWINS: Once again your background work is amazingly varied and high quality (forests are tricky, god damn!) and you got real bold with all those hand-centric shots in the first page! It worked!
LIL_DRAWINS: Once again your background work is amazingly varied and high quality (forests are tricky, god damn!) and you got real bold with all those hand-centric shots in the first page! It worked!
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
1 week
Ended:
Apr 7th, 2022
Votes Cast:
18
Page Views:
840
Winner:
lil_drawins
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drawins: both your art and your writing is wonderful and fun through-and-through. i don't really have anything to comment on; this is just a stand-out comic! lily do be hungry tho...