Woah good catch! I didn't even notice until you pointed that out. I'll make sure to be more careful when reviewing my pages 0.0! Thanks so much for the detailed feedback <3

Thanks so much to everyone else for the comments!! This was a fun one ^^!!!

I can't wait to see the finished product whenever you're doing better Cab!! Life definitely comes first, and I hope you're alright!

As for Juxta- I'm absolutely psyched at getting to see some more of Clever!! The pacing flowed nicely, everything was wonderfully polished, and the story was very charming! Loved this, and I love ya boy! All around amazing, no crits from me :>

Hope you complete the rest as a bb cab! I'd love to read it!
Awesome job Juxta!!!

Juxta!
really cute, just as anticipated. the art is very clean, the lines and the forms all nicely drawn, you know? the emotions are cute and the backgrounds are tidy.
The story is so hammy and really breaths life into what kind of void city we're dealing with, here. The idea that Clever is easily taken advantage of is really prominent here, first being used as an unpaid interterm (and he doesnt even get to meet people all day!) then as meranda's patsy
also:
I spotted a thumb mishap on page 3! I haven't seen one in the wild in ages!

cab, I hope you're doing ok. Please take better care of yourself, when ever possible!
the pages we got were still cute and this was a nice pair up.

Man cool comics!!
Im sorry you couldnt finish, Cab. May luck be with you next time!
Juxta, I love your inking and comedy. The character interaction was great too. Great comicz guys
would love to see more of your characters

These were both pretty nice reads. I'm exhausted by my health dipping so I can understand why you didn't submit a full piece Cab and I wish you luck on your beyond battle.