Invitational Tournament 2022, Round 1 / Pinkster vs. Mythra Cosmos

Invitational Tournament 2022, Round 1 — Pinkster vs. Mythra Cosmos

This comic has been rated suitable for all ages by its creator(s)

Icon for Pinkster 47.9%
471 points
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Crit level: No preference
I honestly ran out of time making this and I had so much going on during this so sorry for the lazy made comic. But I wanted to post something instead of nothing!
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by Selevan

This comic has been rated suitable for all ages by its creator(s)

Icon for Mythra Cosmos52.1%
512 points
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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
tags: colored, minimal dialoge




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Platinumartist
Approval Committee
142 comments
# 16   Posted: Apr 9 2022, 09:25 AM
Good Job with these tales you guys! I've been loving every story so far!

OwlComics: A Nice short tale that doesn't really require much words from the characters to explain what is happening. that is some really good "Show don't Tell" going on right there. Good Job! Hopefully we see Pinkster in some more hijinks in the near future

Selevan: oh very Mysterious! I really like how it went from colorful, to Monotones throughout the tale. Another good small story although I'm sure you figured out the formatting but it should be stated to resize it for reader's use. (The Recommended is 1000px wide)

Heathen
Artist
461 comments
# 15   Posted: Mar 31 2022, 06:06 PM
I completely missed round one, so I’m playing catch-up before I read round 2.

Selevan: Watch your page formatting, lots of horizontal and vertical scanning needed to read this on a phone.

A wonderful, mostly silent, comic. Me thinks you may be a fan of Masashi Tanaka’s GON. I’d love to see you do something in traditional pen and ink or brush. Congrats on the win, can’t wait to see what else you do!

Owlcomics: Nice work getting a finished comic turned in. You clearly have some solid comics chops, and I hope you stick around!

Heavenbat
Approval Committee
228 comments
# 14   Posted: Mar 25 2022, 10:25 AM
Owl: Something *is* better than nothing, and this was an adorable little comic. Simple, but effective imo! You did good with knowing what you could pull off in the time limit. My main critiques are that you don't really need the black border around the page itself--it's unnecessary and doesn't really add much, tbh. There's also some spots--mostly on the first couple panels of page 1--where your colors go a little outside the borders of the panels. But those are both fairly small things tbh. I still just love Pinkster and I hope to see more of this lil cutie hehe

Selevan: Man you did a really good job at portraying that growing sense of unease as Pinkster tunnels down under the tree. And man, that last page gave me some EMOTIONS. Not sure what they were but it was very poignant. It was, admittedly, a little esoteric and I feel like there's some meaning I'm missing out on, but despite that I still really enjoyed it tbh!

ArtsandGoodies
Artist
566 comments
# 13   Posted: Mar 22 2022, 02:56 PM
Great job to both of you, 3-4 colored pages in one week is a good amount to do and even being able to complete that with life stuff going on it's still good. One thing You could both invest in is some more fonts made sepcifically for comics. I say invest but sites like Blambot.com and Dafont.com have tons of free fonts you can download that are specifically meant for comics.

Owlcomics: great job to do this much even with life getting in the way. the colors were very cute.

Selevan: the accidential size upload thing happens but this looks really good composition wise and panel wise. just make sure to save a duplicate that is sized down to 1000 witdh for void next time.

Bobert
Artist
96 comments
# 12   Posted: Mar 22 2022, 07:59 AM
Before I am in bed I'll talk about these as my final invitational tourno comics.

Owlcomics: I understannd running out of time and it's always a shame when it cuts into what you intended for your comic but you did 3 coloured pages that show off both characters in a fair manner. I don't think I even have any real criticisms to bring up besides the panels being slightly uneven, which is very inconsequential haha. It'd be great to see a comic by you at full power.

Selevan: I assumed that Mythra was a bit more heroic from the way you spoke about her but this is a bit more creepy and eerie than I was expecting and that's interesting to see.

Flytee
Think Tank
310 comments
# 11   Posted: Mar 21 2022, 10:43 AM
Glad I finally got round to reading this! Award for the cutest match up.

Owlcomics- Adorable art- the story was super simple but honestly, for a 1 weeker I don't think that's a bad shout.

Selevan - Shame about the size issue, I did have to zoom out to read this properly. I love your layouts and the way the page flows, especially page 2 and 3. I think moving forward finding a more suitable font is essential! Dafont is a site.  

Fridgeman
Artist
8 comments
# 10   Posted: Mar 21 2022, 05:23 AM
OWLCOMICS: Your colours in this comic are very vibrant, and the highlights in your lighting are very fitting for this comic about 2 little critters. Bravo!
SELEVAN: You’ve got a very interesting colour transition going on here, which works marvellously for a lead up to page 3. Your linework here is also super detailed!

PutridVodka
Artist
164 comments
# 9   Posted: Mar 18 2022, 06:33 PM
OWLCOMICS-
Pinkster is such an adorable little guy, I dig the expresisons and feral body language. These two going against each other was a match made in heaven

SELEVAN-
Reading was a little hard due to the page size, wished I could appreciate the entire page better- but overall I liked what I saw! I adore Mythra's design so much!

I can't wait to see what both of these characters get into next!

Fluffsamasprime
Artist
453 comments
# 8   Posted: Mar 18 2022, 01:22 AM
Great job on these! Both characters are so cute. I liked how dark it got on Selevans side even with the pages not quite sized. Owl comic hit the cuteness on the head with this!

Phosphene Comics
Artist
4 comments
# 7   Posted: Mar 16 2022, 02:52 PM
Owlcomics - its so cute!

Selevan - you went "berserk golden age arc" on this, i like it

PyrasTerran
Global Moderator
1504 comments
# 6   Posted: Mar 16 2022, 02:39 PM
Welcome to Void!

OWLCOMICS: Even with a rush job the effort is appreciated. Hope to see what you're capable of at your full power in a future comic.

SELEVAN: Very nice visual storytelling, it's a shame the images are so large they make it difficult to really appreciate.

Gregly
Artist
180 comments
# 5   Posted: Mar 15 2022, 04:01 PM
Owlcomics- I love the bright colors and the simple rescue story! The panel gutters are a little big but it makes it feel more innocent, v cute

Selevan- The environments here are great, i like the bright greens on the first page and the underground-y details on the second page. Also your pages are very very big so I had to zoom way out to read them properly, so keep that in mind for next time... great work!

johannhawk
Artist
21 comments
# 4   Posted: Mar 15 2022, 01:19 PM
Owl:
cute friends...

Selevan:
i'm practically slurping up these environments

RamenBean18
Artist
67 comments
# 3   Posted: Mar 15 2022, 10:15 AM
These two comics are amazing!!! Great job Owl!!! So proud of you!!

DesDemonical
Artist
15 comments
# 2   Posted: Mar 15 2022, 08:59 AM
Owl- aw a really cute introduction and meeting. Love the new besties

Sel- I really love the creativity with your panels on the one where Pinkster is going down into the ground and the way your color palette changes so dramatically! really fun stuff.

snager
Artist
362 comments
# 1   Posted: Mar 7 2022, 09:53 PM
hey hey hey, i'm a little guy! I'm a little guy and it's my birthday!

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