Kaisho Ponbiki vs. Madman Han

Kaisho Ponbiki vs. Madman Han

Kaisho Ponbiki vs. Madman Han

by PONBIKI

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Icon for Kaisho Ponbiki59.1%
757 points
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by Jake

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Icon for Madman Han40.9%
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Pixelchop
Artist
139 comments
# 26  
nice work from both of you guys hope to see a rematch

Tronix
Artist
138 comments
# 25  
PON..great Job!!I got the same problem in lettering  but im doing what he said...Consulting the Dictionary!!.
Madman Han made a great Job.. it is much better than the last one

red-6
Artist
6 comments
# 24  
Dammit - I HATE when the art is so cool, yet the english is poor! I know some people might not really care, but I find it very distracting when words as simple as "gonna" and "confinement" are misspelled!

No offense to you Pon, but I feel all artists need to at least consult a dictionary when lettering their fights if they are uncertain about the spellings of certain words.

That said - I totally dig your style, Pon! I don't think Red would stand a chance against him! But I will need to challenge you before I decide to kill Red off next year!!


Jake
Artist
78 comments
# 23  
Yooooo.  Good shit, got a lot of useful crits.  Words will never embody an entire frame on 100% opacity again.  Some of the middle pages were rushed; i inked out of sequence and was running low on time.  Thanks Pon, though it wore my ass out, overall i enjoyed doing this, and thanks to everyone for the comments.  Love and paysche.  

PONBIKI
Artist
184 comments
# 22  
hey gang. thanks to jake for giving a great fight, you are improving and keep it up. thanks for all the props from everyone. i hope to bring even more action fo rthe armageddon fight. so sees yous later.

galvo
Artist
146 comments
# 21  
godamn... WHERE DID HAN GO?!


pon, you pulling some kill bill shit on us here? you aint gonna say the name of that place till the end n shit? hahha

very hype man, yer getting better .. yer composition and storytelling is starting to really pick up.


HAN- hype shit man, looks like you rushed it a little though.
much better than the previous entries i've seen from ya, KEEP IT UP


fel/P2
Artist
275 comments
# 20  
pon we really got to fight one day, i loved the action and movement of this fight and the greys on it worked nicely for me
great fight both of yall but pon won me over with this one

Fuudasha
Artist
92 comments
# 19  
Very cool works you two,  this was some good reading!  I gotta admit that I enjoyed the flow of Han's story more than Kaisho's, and Jake, your style is definitely improving, but Pon's brought some good stuff to the table as well.  I'm interested to see how Han might handle the predicament Kaisho's just given him on Ponbiki's end, and I also find it very cool that you both handled each other's characters wonderfully.  Keep up the good work.

sauceboy
Artist
99 comments
# 18  
PON, man..i have to give you props.  i liked the solid simplicity of your drawings.  the greys were really effective.  good stuff.   MADMAN, your stuff wasn't bad either, maybe next time throw in some grey scale or color and you are there, man.  good stuff, though, both of you.

Knomer
Artist
87 comments
# 17  
ive always wanted to use a clotheline in a battle...but thats possibly the best one ive ever seen drawn, kudos on that

Marley
Artist
259 comments
# 16  
Ponbiki.... that was the sass.... like uber sass.... OMG SASS! Jake, you're always improving, and I know you were having some issues with the battle, but good job anyway. Ponbiki wins me over this time

A Bad Idea
Artist
320 comments
# 15  
Han : MAJOR improvement bud. I can see you've got a strong grip on frame composition and arrangement (and I especially love how some characters overlap the frame borders...I gotta do that some time...^^). Action direction is excellent with the exception of a few frames (the ever-infamous BLEED and CRASH frames), but overall well played. I would suggest playing around with line weights to help differentiate foreground and background objects/characters. You should also try to exagerrate motion a little more; some more action lines would have made the fight look MUCH cooler, IMO. Anyhow, I love the direction you took, throwing the end first and all, and I can't wait to see more from you. Who knows, Veiden might pay you a visit. :D

PONBIKI : AWESOMENESS INDEED. Dude you've got a killer style that just yells BADASS. Han looks frikkin MEAN. I'd play around with frame arrangement just a bit more to give a better flow for a couple pages, but otherwise, everyone else already pointed out the other things. Nice job ! So many people to challenge...O_O

zombi
Artist
334 comments
# 14  
O_O.... great fight you two!
but i think ponbiki did an awesome job. jake man, ur fight was great, but i the lack of shading made it difficult at time to make out what was going on.
great job u two, but ponbiki takes the cake

Flare
Artist
10 comments
# 13  
Man dat was a nice fight.Good entries from both sides, i hope my fight goes as well.

Reign
Artist
208 comments
# 12  
aahaha!
Mega violence rocks!
Awesome bone shattering attack ponbiki!
The bloodthirstyness of madman was really shown here Jake. Good stuff from both of u! Good luck!

kanishei
Artist
18 comments
# 11  
Not bad, Not bad AT ALL!!! maby ill see one or both of you guys on the battle field...........eventually.

Phill
Artist
895 comments
# 10  
Holy Crap! ... Ok ... that's pretty much a good sign for both of you as you can probably tell heh heh. Anywho I really liked what I saw in both comics, but my vote will be for Ponbiki unfortunetly

Ponbiki: I really enjoyed your comic artwise, storywise, and action wise. My only complaint is the movement of the characters... especially in the first page, Han just seemed to be 2 feet away from Ponbiki to me, personaly I'd make those speed lines a bit longer in order to show that Han moved a greater distance at a very quick speed. But aside from that your art won me over for this one, I look forward to more in the future (and durring the armaggedon battles as well ;) )

Han: I do see an improvement in art quality, still not perfect (psst! I do know a perfect site that gives good hints and tips for perfecting comic art... let me know if you are interested) but for this battle I looked over it, I really liked how you approched this comic man, bringing the end first and beggining after that was pretty clever idea if you ask me, and showing an even crazier side to Han was a brilliant touch (He's a cannibal now... EEK!). My only complaint is that you shouldn't put sound effects over the art (main areas: the Giant BLEED letters made the art look messy, so did the CRASH panel) I'm not too proficiant in sound effects so the best thing I can say is that sometimes you should make the sound effects smaller, and the panel with BLEED could of easily been in the background and still have the same effect or better.

Anywho, I guess I was a bit generous due to what I saw here, seeing as how I really liked both suprizingly (sp?) anywho keep it up or something?

PONBIKI
Artist
184 comments
# 9  
yeah we also turned in 6 pages instead of 4 how weird is that.

PONBIKI
Artist
184 comments
# 8  
jake your improving nicely, great plot. i can believe you also did the flesh eating thing. i just mentioned it slightly. but you actually did it on your story, haha thats cool. i hope everything was cool
with waht i had Han doing. i totally loved when Han went crazy.
i had one problem the panel when Han stabs kaisho the first time.
if you would have played with the opacity on that layer it would have shown more of the drawing. but it was cool. thanks for playing. later. madman han was fun to draw.

Jake
Artist
78 comments
# 7  
Wooo i turned it in on time.

Pon, i knew id lose goin into this, but ive got a new personal best and i love your entry.

Reign
Artist
208 comments
# 6  
when ya get the chance jake i'd love a madman han fight with my fighter (once i get him submitted) A psycho against my monster...YUM
Good luck to both of u!

Jake
Artist
78 comments
# 5  
Man... im gonna try hard but this may not get turned in on time.  I've had ample time and i deserve whatever shit anyone says, but for the life of me i swear i cant move forward.  Im sorry.

sheldon
Artist
141 comments
# 4  
i'm gaggin to see what kaisho can do....bring it to the table lads.

chunkplex
Artist
184 comments
# 3  
The sooner the better I say...Fight on homies, BTW Jake, you are still in my crosshairs.

PONBIKI
Artist
184 comments
# 2  
my bad dude i thought you meant this friday that just past. but still glad your still up for this.

Jake
Artist
78 comments
# 1  
Yo i meant i was gonna challenge you next week but its cool i was itchin to get started anyway.

Comic Details -

 
Drawing Time: 3 weeks
Ended: Jun 26th, 2004
Votes Cast: 28
Page Views: 1089
Winner: PONBIKI
 

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