Plat - Ahh! Brett and Rocio being new neighbors is a good precursor for more possible adventures to come! Very lowkey comic which is not a bad thing. It gives us a nice glimpse of Brett's softer/melancholic side.
Pyras - Heck yeah Rocio's back!!! I very much enjoyed Brett's dramatic monologue. Makes him really endearing to me even more. I am sure you got a few things that you plan to reveal in the future. Really curious about those golden tears and Chacal's role from here on out. Raven is also glad to have her roommate back safe and sound (also prolly has a lot of questions for Rocio herself ). Another amazing comic from you which doesn't shock me at this point =P And I absolutely love that Sable cameo.
The Lone Light in the Dark / Brett Black vs. Rocío
Critiques & Comments
# 10
Posted:
Mar 19 2022, 09:43 AM
# 8
Posted:
Mar 18 2022, 06:08 PM
Oh good read on both sides! I dig that vulnerable moment Brett had with Rocío, it was a sweet interaciton between those two. The ending with Brett's friend looking out for him and wishing him well was very sweet, I love it when a tragic character has others looking out for them.
It's also great to see Rocío return, I am intrigued to see how this developement affects her later on. The news was a very good way to fill in the audience, and I was so excited to see Doña Belleza in action. Great pacing! I can't wait what's waiting for poor sweet Rocío!
It's also great to see Rocío return, I am intrigued to see how this developement affects her later on. The news was a very good way to fill in the audience, and I was so excited to see Doña Belleza in action. Great pacing! I can't wait what's waiting for poor sweet Rocío!
# 7
Posted:
Mar 18 2022, 03:52 PM
These were both good, and I'm so happy to see Rocio back in comics! I'm sorry about the difficulties plat, I'm glad you finished the comic anyway. Pyras, I love the grayscale you used and the story you're building up for Rocio!
# 6
Posted:
Mar 18 2022, 12:54 PM
Interesting comics both of you.
Platinum: loved the interactions between Rocio and Brett.
Pyras: the shift from greytones to color in the second page as the fight goes on was cool!
Platinum: loved the interactions between Rocio and Brett.
Pyras: the shift from greytones to color in the second page as the fight goes on was cool!
# 5
Posted:
Mar 17 2022, 08:02 PM
That monologing!
Glad to see these both up finally! Awesome job all around!
Glad to see these both up finally! Awesome job all around!
# 4
Posted:
Mar 12 2022, 01:20 PM
great works you two!
platinum: the art looks good! i must admit though i think retelling things that are already in detail in a bio and character sheet isn´t the best way to nourish a comic even if there are elements untold. (of course void is about the comics which should tell the story but since we have a biography section for void this is nonetheless a bit too much to my liking) I figure the former partner will play a role in the future? its an interesting aspect and i feel mischief somehow. i am excited to see where this is going.
pyras: wonderful work as always. i chuckled a good bit but i wonder what urged you make brett kind of a comic relief character here with their vigilante talk. it was funny but also felt a little wrong? Also i might have missed the detail about rocio but why are her tears golden? super cool fade from greyscales to the full color section! very mysterious! btw jackal is badass
platinum: the art looks good! i must admit though i think retelling things that are already in detail in a bio and character sheet isn´t the best way to nourish a comic even if there are elements untold. (of course void is about the comics which should tell the story but since we have a biography section for void this is nonetheless a bit too much to my liking) I figure the former partner will play a role in the future? its an interesting aspect and i feel mischief somehow. i am excited to see where this is going.
pyras: wonderful work as always. i chuckled a good bit but i wonder what urged you make brett kind of a comic relief character here with their vigilante talk. it was funny but also felt a little wrong? Also i might have missed the detail about rocio but why are her tears golden? super cool fade from greyscales to the full color section! very mysterious! btw jackal is badass
# 3
Posted:
Mar 9 2022, 03:04 AM
I read "the Bone light" and was like
Ah yes. More dog jokes.
Ah yes. More dog jokes.
# 2
Posted:
Mar 5 2022, 06:57 PM
I can't wait to see this comic, it's gonna be amazing, it's gonna be like PORN but for the eyes ;-D
# 1
Posted:
Feb 26 2022, 07:22 AM
Rocio huh… *puffs cigarette* haven’t heard that name in years
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2 weeks
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Mar 18th, 2022
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