VCV: Ingress / Raven

VCV: Ingress — Raven

by Rivana

This comic has been rated suitable for all ages by its creator(s)

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Small comic I decided to do on a whim to try a new style. It is short but I hope you guys like it.

I actually finished this in 1 week instead of 2 weeks that I thought it was going to take me so that was a nice surprise.

A million thanks to Kozispoon for being my second pair of eyes on this.
tags: raven, vampire, vcv, void city valkyries




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Heavenbat
Artist
227 comments
# 16   Posted: Feb 23 2022, 06:16 PM
I really like the rough look you got going on here, especially in the bits with rim lighting!! However, some of the angles--especially when Raven is opening the portal to the beach--feel a little... counterintuitive? It honestly took me a couple readthroughs to figure out what was happening there lol. I think it's because it looks less like she's opening a portal and then stepping through it, and more like she's casting light or something?
Story-wise, I do like this introspective tone, but I think for me it's getting a little repetitive? like, Raven's story has had a lot of these "I'm a monster, I don't deserve people caring about me, I only bring pain to those around me" moments, which by themselves I don't have a problem with, but I'd like to see something new! It feels like there's been a lot of setup but no payoff yet? But hey! Hopefully this will lead to a progression in her story, I'm interested in seeing what comes of this cliffhanger *eyes emoji*

Red
Council
696 comments
# 15   Posted: Feb 17 2022, 06:41 AM
Damn, this is such a beautiful style! Incredible work!

Animeshen
Artist
1443 comments
# 14   Posted: Feb 16 2022, 09:48 AM
I forgot to comment while this was in voting ><;; BUT THIS CAME OUT AMAZING! I love this new style youve been working with and I hope its faster so we can see more art from you! The broad strokes are so SEXY in your style~ and i love the reds and greens at the end. Gorgeous work!!!

Rivana
Artist
345 comments
# 13   Posted: Feb 16 2022, 07:06 AM
Thank you so much to all of you! I am very glad this experimentation is well-received. I'll try to make more comics with this style (and hope to improve as I go)  as I also enjoyed the process very much. <3

ArtsandGoodies
Community Manager
566 comments
# 12   Posted: Feb 15 2022, 10:56 PM
This is my first time seeing a fully comic in this painterly style and it looks amazing.

Rikun
Artist
145 comments
# 11   Posted: Feb 14 2022, 09:38 PM
Your rendering is on point as always, and I'm glad that you've found a style that you can get done within a week! Hope to see you apply this workflow to your future stories.

Fluffsamasprime
Artist
416 comments
# 10   Posted: Feb 14 2022, 12:06 PM
You've been kicking ass with this gorgeous painterly style!

snager
Artist
339 comments
# 9   Posted: Feb 10 2022, 06:25 PM
Rivana, this is SO lovely~! You should teach a lecture on how you make your art look so traditional ! very moody , as well

feels like a magazine add for a new book coming out next fall?

Pita
Community Manager
276 comments
# 8   Posted: Feb 10 2022, 05:18 PM
I enjoyed this style exploration!  Looking forward to what happens next.

Jade★
Council
1167 comments
# 7   Posted: Feb 9 2022, 12:30 PM
Also LOOK OUT RAVEN! BEHIND YOU! 😱

Jade★
Council
1167 comments
# 6   Posted: Feb 9 2022, 12:29 PM
This new style works so well for you! I love how you took advantage of it to create such beautiful borderless panels that are clearly delineated by color and visual hierarchy despite blending into each other. Just 😩👌 excellent work!

Kozispoon
Artist
1210 comments
# 5   Posted: Feb 8 2022, 08:55 PM
Love that the thumbnail is a doorway

IItherockmanII
Artist
53 comments
# 4   Posted: Feb 8 2022, 07:14 PM
Your hard work and dedication shows Riv! This looks AWESOME!

JCee
Artist
402 comments
# 3   Posted: Feb 8 2022, 03:43 PM
AHHH This was SO beautiful riv!

Goldie
Artist
64 comments
# 2   Posted: Feb 8 2022, 03:41 PM
RIV IM GONNA EXPLODE

Kozispoon
Artist
1210 comments
# 1   Posted: Jan 31 2022, 11:39 AM
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Drawing Time: 2 weeks
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