Ayako & Fluffbucket vs. vonnegut vicious

Ayako & Fluffbucket vs. vonnegut vicious

Ayako & Fluffbucket vs. vonnegut vicious

by endjoi

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FanTa_DudE
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111 comments
# 14  
That 3rd page has sooo much charm!! Classic!
The two characters are very well drawn! Especially Ayako... she's so girly! & cute nasty to boot!!
These "defaults" are coming in surplus aren't they? Bummer.

SilverLimit
Artist
186 comments
# 13  
Nice work endjoi. The fight looks a little rushed, but the humor is good ^_^ Damn, really wanted to see more from Vonnegut Vicious X_X

zombi
Artist
334 comments
# 12  
hehehe, endjoi's entry is so cute XD
to bad, V.V. your character has class, would have loeved to see what u could dish out

Wei Ingnan
Artist
597 comments
# 11  
bad hoodoo mama.......I think yer putting the jinx on yer competition........

Vincent
Artist
49 comments
# 10  
Default!?   Sweet!  I mean...  poor Vonnegut.

A Bad Idea
Artist
320 comments
# 9  
WOO I'm on a roll ! FAT CRITS FOR EVERYONE !! Ayako&Fluffs : I've always been fond of your style, and it doesn't show any signs of falter in this fight. You've got nice art, good story flow, and a solid sense of direction. The only thing I would fix in this fight is frame composition. You should aim to fill out your frames with as much as you can, even if it means rearranging characters to give a further sense of dynamic. I also think the last page could use some working on; The angle of Ayako's arm could be curved to suggest a hook, since now it looks more like a straight punch torwards the screen. You could also improve the being-hit motion on Vonnegut to suggest he was actually punched, and not just falling over. It might actually help to have Vonnegut lying on his back on the last frame as well. Overall, this is a rather solid entry. Good luck getting your future challenges to actually fight ! ^^;; BTW you're on my hitlist, and there is NO WAY IN THE 7 HELLS that I will default a fight !

RoadMaster
Artist
65 comments
# 8  
all hail endjoi! the new default queen of void! (kicks latem out of chair back into the pile with the other whores)

Molotov
Artist
174 comments
# 7  
hahah welcome to my world, endjoi. i got like 6 default wins.

reggie
Artist
23 comments
# 6  
i am sooooo sorry. i tried but nothing wascoming out and then i had several assignments for school. exams are coming up and everything. this will never happen again :[

endjoi
Artist
77 comments
# 5  
NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!  I'M CURSED!!!!!!!  ANOTHER DEFAULT!!!!!!!!!! *cries*

Johnny Blaque
Artist
96 comments
# 4  
Hehe, Zombies and Sky Pirates!  Oh my.

endjoi
Artist
77 comments
# 3  
I really cut this one close...I submitted it with 5 minutes left to spare!!!!!

endjoi
Artist
77 comments
# 2  
I'm soooo excited!  I can't wait ^_^

reggie
Artist
23 comments
# 1  
this is gonna be awesome :]

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Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Jun 12th, 2004
Votes Cast: 17
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