Rat with Wings Part 2 / Celif

Rat with Wings Part 2 — Celif

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Footini
Artist
356 comments
# 15   Posted: Nov 18 2021, 07:58 PM
Celif is a trashy treasure.
this has a good gritty feel to it and helps serve as a quick bridge between battles
same as flytee i think the paneling could be more chaotic like the beginning throughout to help with the urgency.
also I need that city building brush.

FrankenToon
Artist
26 comments
# 14   Posted: Nov 18 2021, 07:51 PM
Wanna start off by saying I absolutely ADORE Celif, bird-brained bastard is definitely someone I would love to battle against one day!

The gritty sepia-nearing tones really suit his overal grungey/filthy atmosphere, and a in-comic look at his griffon was something I long wanted!! Good stuff, short simple n sweet <3

Flytee
Think Tank
310 comments
# 13   Posted: Nov 18 2021, 02:13 PM
The chaos continues, I love what you're doing with this character. I'm curious to see what trouble he gets into next.
I loved all the background details, the final panel on page two was a particularly excellent (and gross!) use of spot blacks! As always I'm a huge fan of how you draw expressions and body language.

Crit wise I think some of the paneling here could have been work-shopped.
- I like the concept behind the first 3 panels of page 1, but it felt a bit constrained, I think you could've punched up the feeling of nausea and faintness (I'm guessing that's the intention) by changing up the sizes & shapes of the panels & overlapping them with the SFX themselves.  
-The big black space on page 3 didn't feel intentional. Having the text cascade down the page might've helped with this...though honestly ideally enlarging the one panel you did have by extending the skyline would have been perfect and made this moment feel even more impactful.

(I've potentially explained my crits badly here, so if you need any clarification, feel free to dm me!)

TRM_that guy that is cool
Artist
5 comments
# 12   Posted: Nov 18 2021, 08:45 AM
yo this is cool well done, the background was grate, the door being broke down is good and the last panel looks super cool

Don
Artist
180 comments
# 11   Posted: Nov 18 2021, 07:11 AM
Great stuff, Fluff! Your background work is really nice here, I love how grungy it feels-- The light texture overlay at the end of the third page is also a great touch. The expressions going on here are also absolute aces as well. Keep it up!

Radji
Artist
597 comments
# 10   Posted: Nov 16 2021, 11:52 AM
GET THAT CHICKEN!!
Throw bees at him!
Wait there's no bees here...

PutridVodka
Artist
165 comments
# 9   Posted: Nov 15 2021, 05:14 PM
I love how in disarray the panels are on the first page! Celif is such a bastard and I really love seeing what he's up to!

Pita (Slowly getting back into it)
Community Manager
276 comments
# 8   Posted: Nov 15 2021, 03:09 PM
I read the first Rat with Wings and the scar match with Lilyfeather before going into this one, and it's a vast improvement.  I doubt he's going to want to change so quickly, but think I want to hitlist this man specifically because of his dirty deeds.

IItherockmanII
Artist
74 comments
# 7   Posted: Nov 15 2021, 10:25 AM
This rat I love, I absolutely love.

Snowy
Artist
184 comments
# 6   Posted: Nov 15 2021, 06:50 AM
Celif is such a garbage bird, and I love it. I'm really interested in how he'll continue with a bad hand and the cops now after him! I always love how expressive you make everyone, and I really like the monochrome coloring!

Animeshen
Artist
1453 comments
# 5   Posted: Nov 14 2021, 10:31 PM
Aw baby, what happened to your hand? >=P i can't believe this garbage bird. Your bedroom is really all dead bodies and fly strips? BOYYYYYY, no amount of febreez is gonna hide that smell, how does he stand it? Well I guess it doesn't matter since hes homeless now! Excellent monochromes, delightfully grimy. No crits at the moment, just lovin this! Cant wait to see what happens to him next!

snager
Artist
364 comments
# 4   Posted: Nov 14 2021, 02:53 PM
wow, Celif is nastier than I anticipated. he just lived there? with the bodies of the people he killed? that's nasty.

one star, would not recommend this doctor to a friend or stranger

Platinumartist
Approval Committee
142 comments
# 3   Posted: Nov 14 2021, 11:29 AM
Nice Monochromatic Comic! It looks great and I am very interested to see where Rats with Wings part 3 leads to

Cab
Artist
141 comments
# 2   Posted: Nov 14 2021, 11:15 AM
and so the chase begins, what will Celif do now that the cops are on to him ?, I'm  intrigued, keep up the good work, fluff :-)

RamenBean18
Artist
68 comments
# 1   Posted: Nov 14 2021, 11:13 AM
Such a lovely comic!!! ❤️☺️

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