Divine Encounter / Dairyu vs. Nagore

Divine Encounter / Dairyu vs. Nagore

Divine Encounter — Dairyu vs. Nagore

This comic has been rated suitable for all ages by its creator(s)

Icon for Dairyu43.4%
324 points
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Crit level: No critique desired, comments encouraged
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This comic has been rated suitable for teens and up by its creator(s)

Icon for Nagore56.6%
422 points
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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
tags: dairyu, nagore, petrichor, ramunas, snowymoth




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SnowyMoth
Artist
128 comments
# 16   Posted: Dec 19 2021, 11:33 AM
I was out of the state while this was in the voting process, so I wasn't able to read it until now.

First - Thank you so much for battling me, Petrichor! I absolutely loved your comic and how amazing it was! I want to continue these shenanigans with Nagore, they're such a chaotic duo. The angles are absolutely fantastic, and the story was such a joy to read coming back from everything else.

Second - The comic I had planned originally wasn't like this at all. The comic I am currently trying to finish now is much more like the other comics I have uploaded to the site. I've had two family deaths in the past month, one of whom was my father, and I realized there was just no way I was going to be able to complete the comic I had wanted to in the midst of everything else. I wanted to make an attempt though, and remembered reading these sorts of 4koma comics, and really liking them. I'm glad people thought they were cute, but please don't expect this for the new comic. : )

Petrichor
Artist
74 comments
# 15   Posted: Dec 17 2021, 11:01 PM
Thanks everyone who took the time to leave a critique or a nice comment! I appreciate each of them :D
The lineart is kind of the only critqueable part here with some drops in quality/consistency but i guess its just due to making it proper to the deadline maybe. Oh i am nitpicking.
Thanks for making my day!
Quote from: Elyan
Yeah that's on me, i kinda overdone with the page count again, i tend to do that a lot but this time i couldn't manage to finish them all ajksdfg. I'm glad i've made your day!

I love the way you draw Dairyu's face. kind of like a shape shifting animal's attempt to copy humanity. what a great way to not only differentiate the characters, but add some interest and subtlety to Dairyu.
Quote from: snager
Yess i wanted to explore that "Ancient Dragon God" side of hers through her appearance and gave her a more beasty look than the usual. Glad you noticed :D

Snowy i looove the contrast of our stories. Yours is just so adorable, and that panel with cat Dairyu gives me life lmao (seriously, look at those PAWS).
Thank you for battling me and uploading what you had. I'm happy you decided to do it even if it's incomplete. Hopefully i'll get to see the whole story you were planning, i know i'll love it to bits.

Rikun
Artist
137 comments
# 14   Posted: Dec 17 2021, 09:20 PM
Snowy: Sorry to see that you couldn't finish what you wanted, but life always comes first. What you did bring in looks pretty cute, and hopefully you'll get a chance to tell the full story.

Petrichor: I had a lot of fun with your fight choreography in this comic, and the visuals are pretty creative! I'm also glad to see your sense of humor coming through even when the story gets intense. Can't wait to see where this relationship goes once all's said and done.

Reecer6
Artist
348 comments
# 13   Posted: Dec 17 2021, 08:37 PM
snowy: sorry you couldn't put out what you wanted! i do want to comment but i feel like i'm missing context here <.<

petrichor: a wonderful fight and a wonderful comic!! i continue to love these two and your portrayal of a merciless dairyu as well!

Platinumartist
Artist
112 comments
# 12   Posted: Dec 17 2021, 07:11 PM
Snowy: Sorry to hear but I understand that life comes first and be sure that I still enjoyed what we got in this fight. I hope things look up in the near future for ya! I'll be awaiting for what comes next for Dairyu and what else you have in the works when you are good and ready!

Pettrichor: Holy damn man! I am a huge fan of how you weave your stories and make me just so invested in the various characters within the narrative. the linework is clean as always and I really like the interaction between Nagore and Dairyu and I'm glad that things worked out in the end. I hope to see more in the near future!

You both did great and it was a blast reading through both stories

brownkidd
Artist
18 comments
# 11   Posted: Dec 17 2021, 05:26 PM
Awesome match! Petrichor, SO MANY PAGES!!! Awesome angles and poses. Snowymoth, your lettering is legit some of the best I’ve seen on Void. Killer job!

PutridVodka
Artist
113 comments
# 10   Posted: Dec 17 2021, 03:19 PM
This was such a good match, I loved it!!
Dairyu's and Nagore's dynamic is so cute and clever, great job to both!

snager
Artist
258 comments
# 9   Posted: Dec 17 2021, 11:44 AM
snowy: this submission kind of feels like a clip show without the transitions between the clips. It's just a little tid bit but i'm glad you shared it anyway.

really nice work, Petrichor. I love Nagore and how you draw her little dog-body and attach all the gorilla arms and shark parts and it all still looks so believable. this battle was such an obvious choice. two demi god style characters with non human alt forms. I actually hecked up and thought the comic was over. then I returned and realized: WAIT. there's MORE???!? What a full on complete STORY you've done! and, I love the way you draw Dairyu's face. kind of like a shape shifting animal's attempt to copy humanity. what a great way to not only differentiate the characters, but add some interest and subtlety to Dairyu.

alberto311
Artist
374 comments
# 8   Posted: Dec 16 2021, 06:57 PM
Wow! Well done you two!!!!

Petrichor, great storytelling technics… looking forward to see more from you! ❤️❤️❤️

Flytee
Artist
287 comments
# 7   Posted: Dec 16 2021, 08:19 AM
damn, seeing my two faves battling was a treat, you're both insanely talented and I loved your takes on one another's characters.

Snowy- I'm obsessed with how you drew "chibis" here, such a cute style. ;_; This was a very amusing, visually lovely read.
Petrichor- You balanced intense gore and action with humor masterfully, this was an excellently paced, pro-level comic.

Feeling inspired after reading these.

IItherockmanII
Artist
32 comments
# 6   Posted: Dec 12 2021, 10:14 PM
Snowy: I loved the interactions between Nagore and Dairyu and your inks and expressions looked super clean!!!

Petrichor: First comic that I read from you, and it was awesome. Seeing Dairyu and Nagore fight was brutal!

Fluffsamasprime
Artist
330 comments
# 5   Posted: Dec 11 2021, 12:28 PM
Snowy: I will make Rickter a master chef now. I feel inspired. Loved seeing how cat like Dairyu can be. As always love your art and how perfect the lineart is.

Petrichor: Poor Nagore! She just wanted to do her job. Really enjoyed the 'Bob' shirt. Wonderful battle scenes and enjoyed two gods helping each other out!

Elyan
Artist
124 comments
# 4   Posted: Dec 10 2021, 11:36 PM
Snowy thats a sweet scene collection. Looking forward to the finished work!

Petrichor: i think that was my favourite comic this year! Witty, actionpacked, quirky, cruel, gory and overall wholesome nonetheless. God i love it!
The lineart is kind of the only critqueable part here with some drops in quality/consistency but i guess its just due to making it proper to the deadline maybe. Oh i am nitpicking.
Thanks for making my day!

Petrichor
Artist
74 comments
# 3   Posted: Dec 10 2021, 09:15 PM
Hey! you ended up uploading something Snowy!
I just wish i knew the context of that but i did enjoyed everyone's interaction lol
That was really cute :D

Petrichor
Artist
74 comments
# 2   Posted: Dec 9 2021, 08:06 PM
It's alright Snowy, life happens.
I can understand you not wanting to upload an incomplete comic. And if you're planning to finish it someday i'll still be super excited to read it as i was today.
Take care <3

SnowyMoth
Artist
128 comments
# 1   Posted: Dec 9 2021, 05:41 PM
I originally had a 20 page comic written out for this and thumbed, and which I still plan on completing. Without getting into the reasons too much, I wasn't able to complete enough of it to want to post it uncompleted. Sorry, Petrichor.

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Drawing Time: 5 weeks
Ended: Dec 17th, 2021
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Page Views: 584
Winner: Petrichor
 

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