Cargo Collision / Devil's Tooth vs. Kalkyza

Cargo Collision / Devil's Tooth vs. Kalkyza

Cargo Collision — Devil's Tooth vs. Kalkyza

This comic has been rated adults only by its creator(s)

Icon for Devil's Tooth42.9%
139 points
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Crit level: No critique desired, comments encouraged
it's all sketches and minimal words so sorry about the mess you are inevitably going to look at... i'm still kinda proud of it tho so i don't care
tags: devils tooth, kalkyza


by Reecer6

This comic has been rated adults only by its creator(s)

Icon for Kalkyza57.1%
185 points
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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
tags: devils tooth, kalkyza, smut, smut battle




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Fluffsamasprime
Artist
330 comments
# 6   Posted: Dec 12 2021, 05:23 PM
what a way to end the year. Fun smut battle!

Pita
Community Manager
265 comments
# 5   Posted: Dec 12 2021, 03:51 PM
I can appreciate the work that went into both of these entries.

NOTHIN, absolutely take pride in what you could do.  The ending specifically had a level of intimacy I would like to see more often in smut battles.  I'll need to incorporate some of that into my stuff whenever I do one of these.

REECER- the disclaimer at the beginning got a chuckle from me.  I can appreciate the type of humor you dish out.  And you've been improving on your bodies from when you first started drawing smut.  Good job.

snager
Artist
258 comments
# 4   Posted: Dec 9 2021, 02:01 PM
hey, its good to be proud of what you sent in, Lucky! I can kind of tell this was going to be sci fi tentacle porn so I'm definitely on board for the concept.

reecer, your finished pages look quite nicely polished and i like that you included a bit of plot to push things along.

both of you: very bizarre stuff yall

Elyan
Artist
124 comments
# 3   Posted: Dec 9 2021, 01:14 PM
nothin: honestly I had no idea what was going on until page 7. its pretty cute in the end and i see how you are happy with it. my only hope would be to see you doing sketches that are more readable so I don´t have to guess whats going on. page 9 is such a lovely zoom in btw.

Cro: the layout you got there especially in the first 5 pages was super fun. nice introduction to where and what with a jump right into action. overall its a cool comic with some laughs init as well. the smut well juicy for sure. i feel like you catched devil tooths character nicely.
artwise i must admit. i love your sketches. sure sketches have usually that certain dynamic which is easily lost later. your rendered pages to me are just void of any of it. they lost that dynamic. maybe its to lack of lineweight variations or that minimalistic cell shading. I don´t know but i feel like you have some potential unexplored there.
all the more reason to look forward to your next comic.

Gregly
Artist
163 comments
# 2   Posted: Dec 7 2021, 06:09 PM
Nothin- i didnt get the first few pages but the rest is readable from your panel compositions. when the dialog started between the two of them i thought it was quite cute. and, even though the comic cuts off kind of in the middle, it's still a satisfying ending because of the build-up for what happens next that we dont see. it would have looked great finished but i like your sketches anyway!

Cro- i was excited for this when the disclaimer page made me laugh. I like Kalkyza's smile throughout this and the different camera angles. The two of them having to deal with eachother's strange outfits is a good gag. And, youknowit, i love these colors-- this rendering style is so pleasing to look at! Now to wait a whole long old year until Kalkyza comes back.

Reecer6
Artist
348 comments
# 1   Posted: Dec 5 2021, 01:12 PM
woah, it was a stealth smut battle all along! are you taken by surprise???

my comic is majority sketches, which is fine because i wanted to take this battle easy anyway. plus, you can't really blame me for lacking motivation after my last battle got two comments. i know it's hard to comment on a comic that's unfinished, so if you're tired of writing "boy i wish the other 75% of this was colored": if you wanna just make a comment instead regarding my last comic, which was not only finished but also leaps and bounds better and more deserving of a comment, and just post that here, y'know that wouldn't be too bad.

Comic Details -

 
Drawing Time: 4 weeks
Ended: Dec 12th, 2021
Votes Cast: 10
Page Views: 292
Winner: Reecer6
 

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