Zoey vs. The Brick

Zoey vs. The Brick

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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
No color, only lineart. This has been a taxing two weeks, and I'm at a point where I can be satisfied with most of this. Characters borrowed are Flytee's Torca and neens' Lil Lily.
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by Rikun

This comic has been rated suitable for all ages by its creator(s)

Icon for The Brick46.6%
355 points
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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
A storyboard-esque comic with chicken and brick shenanigans! A big thanks to Pita for the opportunity!
tags: month of the dead, the brick, zoey




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Fluffsamasprime
Artist
482 comments
# 12   Posted: Nov 21 2021, 12:39 PM
I'm pretty behind on commenting but allow me to get caught up.
Pita: You're was adorable. Such clean line work and I enjoyed them running from the 'mimic' with all the bad luck happening around them.

Rikun: This very much shows your story board style. I was a little confused on page 3 with the first two panels, but still very enjoyable

RamenBean18
Artist
71 comments
# 11   Posted: Nov 18 2021, 09:17 PM
Love y’all’s comics guys!!!

Footini
Artist
357 comments
# 10   Posted: Nov 18 2021, 08:08 PM
I can't believe Zoey got killed by a brick.

Pita- Cute and floofy as always.  Though I figure if you're going with just a black and white lineart look in the future I'd put more detail into the background and give the characters a thicker line width to bring them out from the environment.  Time permitting of course Kind of reminds me of Bone a bit.

Rikun- The killer brick strikes again.  Quick and punchy panels keep the action upbeat.  Though even if you're doing a storyboard look some more confident lines especially on the characters would help.  Just like one more pass to clean them up for being a comic would do.

Cab
Artist
143 comments
# 9   Posted: Nov 18 2021, 06:41 PM
This is such a fun wholesome story, its one of my favorite Zoey comics I have read, good stuff Pita.

Rikun, You did a good job with your action shots and staging, what more adventures lie ahead for the brick, we gotta wait a whole year to find out.

Orion
Artist
224 comments
# 8   Posted: Nov 18 2021, 03:17 PM
Pita: A heartwarming tale of friendship and trust with a devious little piece of masonry mixed in. I love childhood Zoey and her friends, they feel very grounded and sincere and made it so that while Lil has a point Zoey is willing to go the extra mile to be there for s friend. I will say I had to turn back a page or two to figure out how exactly Brick died, the way it’s drawn does imply lightening so that comes across but there is also the picture of the branch which would also foreshadow that but I’m not sure why if they got struck by lightening. Still, that aside it s lovely work and really what I needed today.

Rikun: Now THIS is action! Quick, straightforward and to the point! Everything I’d expect from the baddest brick around! Everything is clearly conveyed from moment to moment shots and the design of Zoey is still quiet cute and energetic! A bit of a whiplash brick just trying to rundown a child trick or treating but given how the comic ends, I think you balanced the tone as more humorous then serious so kudos to that! A little line clean up might have made the overall product pop better but otherwise solid effort and a fun little diddy!

Flytee
Think Tank
312 comments
# 7   Posted: Nov 18 2021, 01:55 PM
Pita - Firstly thank you for including Torca, I love how you incorporated him into Zoey's world :) I found myself smiling throughout this comic, delightful story and your inks are as professional as ever.

Rikun- That was great! I love how often the camera moved around in this comic, it made things feel very dynamic. That final panel had me cackling evilly.

TRM_that guy that is cool
Artist
5 comments
# 6   Posted: Nov 18 2021, 09:18 AM
Pita: nice comic tho it seems Zoey reads Torca like a book to the point i thot you forgot to put text in then i remembered he's mute good read

Rikun: brick go vroom vroom i did really enjoy it tho

snager
Artist
388 comments
# 5   Posted: Nov 16 2021, 05:54 PM
Pita: I can't think of anything more fun than taking a trowel and going out with a friend to 'dig for treats' (the treats are earth worms). this was a very finished and complete little comic . no wasted pages or filler interactions or nothing. Zoey having the cure to Torka's curse is very pure. just an all-around pure story. I'm not sure the mimic-brick is really like Brick, the character, but the concept is so cool i'm sure Rikun won't mind much. very spooky. Zoey would make such a great all-ages comic book, with your DnD-style worldbuilding and charming art style.

Rikun, that was like one of those 'tiktoks that start out calm and get progressively more chaotic' compilations on youtube, but in the form of a 3 page comic. i was able to follow the action well, regardless of angle changes, so that was nice.

Radji
Artist
603 comments
# 4   Posted: Nov 16 2021, 11:50 AM
Pita: I cannot look at a brick wall without reading a charged attack now lmao. Very cute also. Get all those worms.

Rikun: Gratuitous brick violence. My favorite.

Animeshen
Artist
1460 comments
# 3   Posted: Nov 14 2021, 10:35 PM
Aww, pita this was cute, and i loved the use of torca! Im not sure what happened to zoey's beak tho?
Rikun your Brick comics are always so damn funny to me i look forward to them every year lol

Petrichor
Artist
82 comments
# 2   Posted: Nov 14 2021, 09:52 PM
Pita that was so cute! i'm somehow so happy for these two fictional characters?! <3
And Rikun that was hilarious! and i really dig the angles of the action shots.
Good job guys! i loved both of the comics!

Red
Council
702 comments
# 1   Posted: Nov 2 2021, 06:42 AM
THE BRICK?????????? IN 2021??????????

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