nice art improvement ramen

Got a little confused, but I really enjoyed page 2 panel 3. Plenty of flare with this.

Oh very nice work here Ramen. Colors are tight and the story is pretty solid.

Excellent job here Ramen! I like that you open by resolving the fake out at the end of part 1 by showing the pregnant woman right away. The motif of Dynx constantly undressing is good too, it's very early 2010s anime humor, and it redirects this conversation about how he wants to kill the pregnant woman into something more playful. The stakes are still vaguely introduced while keeping the tone playful, very good work there.

Thank you again fro including Cowbell in your comic! That opening panel on page 3 is adorable, he looks like a confused cat or something and I want to hug him. The magical girl transformation was great too, again levying the potentially dark situation. I'm noticing a lot of ambition with the dynamic lunging poses, pop out panels, and extreme close-ups! These are working really well to tell a visual narrative on top of your written narrative, and I think with some tweaking and practice, your comics will get more and more lively and visually interesting (granted, I'm biased because I use those methods A LOT).

Really excellent job on this, and I love the experimentation. Keep it up!!

Well that clears things up a bit more. Good thing he's not a pregnant lady chomper, heh.