Bark vs. Bite, Round 1 / JaJa vs. Vincent Von Caroll

Bark vs. Bite, Round 1 / JaJa vs. Vincent Von Caroll

Bark vs. Bite, Round 1 — JaJa vs. Vincent Von Caroll

by Footini

This comic has been rated suitable for teens and up by its creator(s)

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313 points
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Part 1
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This comic has been rated suitable for teens and up by its creator(s)

Icon for Vincent Von Caroll52.9%
351 points
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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
Jaja forgive me
tags: bark vs bite, Cats, jaja, vampires, vincent, werewolves




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snager
Artist
328 comments
# 7   Posted: Oct 26 2021, 10:28 AM
Footini: I really like the color pallet here, and all the cameos of different vampires and werewolves from the site. and thanks for doing this while also working on The Hand of God on the res team. ToT

putrid: very nice art and cheeky humor

PutridVodka
Artist
138 comments
# 6   Posted: Oct 24 2021, 01:47 PM
Footini, I really liked your round!
The assassination plot was damn good, the way you portrayed how secretive Vincent and Nathaniel were made me so happy! I loved Jaja and Vincent's interactions, the cameos were pretty sweet- and I'm really impressed you managed to color the whole thing while working on other comics at the same time! Good stuff, thank you for fighting me!

Fluffsamasprime
Artist
391 comments
# 5   Posted: Oct 24 2021, 12:30 PM
You guys did awesome! Can't wait for my chance at Vincent!

wilsoninc
8 comments
# 4   Posted: Oct 24 2021, 12:48 AM
Putrid I thoroughly enjoyed your comic- clean, clear to understand, story flowed well and keeps the reader engaged.

Footini I like your fun style I was excited to see where it was going, your set up pulled me in then I found that the story did not flow so well and became muddled. So I was abit disappointed at the end but still pleasant to look at the art.

IItherockmanII
Artist
44 comments
# 3   Posted: Oct 20 2021, 09:55 PM
Good round both of you.

Footini: Loved your colors man, personally I would have liked if Jaja and Vincent interacted a little more, but when they did it's good, very good!

Putrid: I like Vincent more and more with each comic, and I LOVE how you showed us his powers. Good writing, fighting scene and use of graytones!

Kilcra
Artist
69 comments
# 2   Posted: Oct 18 2021, 10:49 AM
Whoo hoo! These are looking great, and the fabled bark vs bite is finaly underway!

Footini: You did a great job setting the mood in your comic. I could practically hear the music, and the way the characters spoke worked very well. I have no critiques on the first part, but when things start getting crazy in the fighting section, the gradients are setting the wrong tone. I think action lines or more chaos in the background would make the riot look way better, since the current gradients look so calming and soothing. Great job overall, Love Jaja's interactions with this mysterious stranger and I'm excited to see more!

Purtid: The way Vincent and Nathaniel interact is so charming, and the contrast between their personalities kiilllls me. I'm wondering if that "I think I'm getting hard" choking section was a reference to Cab's comic with Cowbell haha. This looks polished and I like how much effort you're putting into your shadows, which I think stand out the best on page 8 with Vincent's face. The way Vincent's powers work is handled really well here too, because while I don't know the rules for this character yet and what he can do, this made me interested because you showed him doing something really powerful and cool, but also immediately showed one of his limitations being exploited by Jaja. The only critique I have is the word balloons. The text changed size a lot, and it didn't seem like it was intentional. I read the smaller text as being spoken quieter, but the more I read, the less convinced I was that this was your intention. Not sure if I'm off-base here, but having text at different sizes usually indicates different volumes for the dialogue, and it didn't seem like those sections should have been quiet dialogue. Might be wrong tho.

Lovely work both of you!

Bobert
Artist
44 comments
# 1   Posted: Oct 17 2021, 07:04 AM
Sorry that I don't really do any real critiques but more of a cheerleader sort of thing but I guess that's how I am, I dunno.

I really liked your colour choices for this comic, Foot. Can't wait to see more of the Jaja story one way or the other.

It was really cool to see Vincents shadow powers on display in this comic, Putrid (also Vincent is very handsome ahah).

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Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Oct 24th, 2021
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