how to bail on a burly gap / Manda Naranja

how to bail on a burly gap — Manda Naranja

by snager

This comic has been rated suitable for all ages by its creator(s)

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kstipetic
2 comments
# 12   Posted: Dec 7 2021, 08:49 AM
I love this!! I love Manda!!
The angel design is awesome, too.  The whole comic makes me think of this song:
https://open.spotify.com/track/4naD0iZnsQOD0gqlONmo5z?si=1npjfXByT2KlC6pV38JvLg

snager
Artist
355 comments
# 11   Posted: Oct 11 2021, 08:24 PM
thanks, guys. it'd be interesting to know what's so 'calming' about this comic vs. my other stuff.

could it be that Manda is a character who doesn't emote very hard? the character herself is not a very reactive one? i definitely had planned to make someone who has subtler emotions and finally got around to it.

could it be the pacing ? how having panels all the same size forces you to add more panels, which slows down the action?
:|c i've got a lot to think about.

Platinumartist
Artist
141 comments
# 10   Posted: Oct 10 2021, 11:25 PM
Honestly I felt odd reading this a bit cause it was Snager all the way through and it was also calm. Like I'm not sure how to explain it but holy damn, that was something to read.

Kilcra
Artist
70 comments
# 9   Posted: Oct 10 2021, 10:07 AM
This was weirdly calming to read. The lack of dialogue made me pay attention to the pictures more, and I like how you spaced out the more polished panels. The whole thing felt like a dream and made me super relaxed. Now play me some saxophone as I drift off to sleep at 1pm.

snager
Artist
355 comments
# 8   Posted: Oct 10 2021, 08:24 AM
Quote from: Fluffsamasprime
*Squints* Is that an 'All dogs go to heaven' reference?
Also Final panel on page six is fantastic

thanks, i tried to make SOME panels look good.

and: I combined a lot of pop culture heaven crap to try to capture the vibe.

Fluffsamasprime
Artist
436 comments
# 7   Posted: Oct 8 2021, 09:06 PM
*Squints* Is that an 'All dogs go to heaven' reference?
Also Final panel on page six is fantastic

snager
Artist
355 comments
# 6   Posted: Oct 8 2021, 07:53 PM
Quote from: Footini
I thought a Burly Gap was a clothing store for tough husky sailors.

yes, AND you can buy skate apparel there, with Manda Naranja as spokesperson

Footini
Artist
356 comments
# 5   Posted: Oct 8 2021, 01:01 PM
Quote from: snager
Quote from: Kilcra
Translation: How to not accidentally castrate yourself while skateboarding

just one of the many benefits and draws of the sport discipline to those who already don't have balls

I thought a Burly Gap was a clothing store for tough husky sailors.

snager
Artist
355 comments
# 4   Posted: Oct 8 2021, 12:41 PM
Quote from: Kilcra
Translation: How to not accidentally castrate yourself while skateboarding

just one of the many benefits and draws of the sport discipline to those who already don't have balls

Kilcra
Artist
70 comments
# 3   Posted: Oct 8 2021, 12:09 PM
Quote from: snager
Quote from: Footini
I understood about 45% of the words in the title which only intrigues me more

translation:
"How to safely dismount while in progress of a risky aerial skate trick involving two horizontal planes of wheel contact and land in a way to minimize damage"

Translation: How to not accidentally castrate yourself while skateboarding

snager
Artist
355 comments
# 2   Posted: Oct 8 2021, 11:47 AM
Quote from: Footini
I understood about 45% of the words in the title which only intrigues me more

translation:
"How to safely dismount while in progress of a risky aerial skate trick involving two horizontal planes of wheel contact and land in a way to minimize damage"

Footini
Artist
356 comments
# 1   Posted: Oct 1 2021, 08:56 AM
I understood about 45% of the words in the title which only intrigues me more

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