Light Speed Death Tournament 2021, Round 1 / Ophelia-chan vs. Peronius The Primeval Pizza

Light Speed Death Tournament 2021, Round 1 / Ophelia-chan vs. Peronius The Primeval Pizza

Light Speed Death Tournament 2021, Round 1 — Ophelia-chan vs. Peronius The Primeval Pizza

by Jade★

This comic has been rated suitable for teens and up by its creator(s)

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Jade★
Council
1080 comments
# 12   Posted: Sep 6 2021, 10:23 PM
Congrats, Corn! That was a delicious battle and I wish you luck in the next round!

Footini
Artist
318 comments
# 11   Posted: Sep 6 2021, 12:18 AM
JAde- bonus points for the dog
Corn- the cheesiest death

Frazzler
Artist
34 comments
# 10   Posted: Sep 5 2021, 11:13 PM
Jade: I loved the stale gag. I like that you went for *slice* of life, too. Had some trouble with the staging-where characters and furniture stood in the room between angles. Great colours!

Corn: Really liked this comic. Especially the final panel. I think it was really well drawn. The font changes sizes a few times and I just think that looks a little odd.

Mister Kent
Artist
958 comments
# 9   Posted: Sep 5 2021, 10:13 PM
JADE - I enjoyed the bold lines and color palette you used here! Very tasty!

CORN - I loved the action here, especially that Jurassic Park worthy ending!

SnowyMoth
Artist
123 comments
# 8   Posted: Sep 4 2021, 05:03 PM
I really liked both entries - I think missing the beatdown scene was necessary in Jade's to show the more lighthearted interaction between Bombarda and Ophelia-chan, especially with the page constraints. I did really enjoy the melting cheese tsunami in Corn's, though.

Nice work, both of you : )

PutridVodka
Artist
102 comments
# 7   Posted: Sep 4 2021, 03:55 PM
This was as adorable as it was delicious ⭐

Jade★
Council
1080 comments
# 6   Posted: Sep 4 2021, 03:45 PM
I felt like the BEATDOWN scene was unnecessary because this was meant to be a quick comedy slice of life story and not an action comic. I'm just curious whether the problem is that I didn't do a good enough job creating a slice of life comedy or whether I just should have made a different kind of comic that included the fight scene?

TheCydork
Artist
581 comments
# 5   Posted: Sep 3 2021, 10:40 PM
Jade - It kinda feels like nothing happened here, as Peronius is defeated so quickly and we don’t even see it. The colour scheme is cute though, and I liked the punchline. Why are you all eating your enemies anyway, you nasty people XD

Corn - This was really charming, I loved the pastel palette and squishiness of the characters. Peronius looks absolutely disgusting to touch and I mean that as a compliment; I could almost feel the texture of his melted cheese drenching the cafe.

PyrasTerran
Global Moderator
1493 comments
# 4   Posted: Sep 3 2021, 07:16 PM
Jade: Love the colors, but I'm not loving the total skipping of the beatdown, I'm guessing it was time constraints that got in the way

Cornbread: Love love the visuals all around and the way peronius draws in nearby pizza to get larger, but I'm not loving the lettering or the sound effects, time constraints as well?

Loving it guys, good stuff as usual

Fred
Artist
548 comments
# 3   Posted: Sep 3 2021, 03:38 AM
default entry, it doesn't count as a kill

Corn Of The Breads
Artist
154 comments
# 2   Posted: Sep 3 2021, 02:14 AM
It was a pleasure to do a comic against Jade they have helped me so many times on this site so it was great to finally get to fight them, their character was also so cute I hope yall enjoy the comic I spent a good extra time cleaning up my line work this time around and I hope it shows.

Fluffsamasprime
Artist
299 comments
# 1   Posted: Aug 30 2021, 11:31 AM
I cant wait to see these cheese filled pastel colored deaths!

Comic Details -

 
Type: Speed Death Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 3 weeks
Ended: Sep 5th, 2021
Votes Cast: 33
Page Views: 353
Winner: Corn Of The Breads
 

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