Light Speed Death Tournament 2021, Round 1 / NN vs. Torca

Light Speed Death Tournament 2021, Round 1 / NN vs. Torca

Light Speed Death Tournament 2021, Round 1 — NN vs. Torca

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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KssalDFeHpQ
"Why did you make me do this?!"
tags: light speed death tournament, nn, torca


by Flytee

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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
NN has an unlucky night :c

This comic is basically just a one-sided anime duel...but I hope you enjoy it anyway.
If you're wondering where the dialogue is, both these characters are mute. :>
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Footini
Artist
318 comments
# 9   Posted: Sep 6 2021, 12:16 AM
Ran2- saddest death this round.  and this was the round Bombarda killed a cat!
Flytee- mmm chip!

Mister Kent
Artist
958 comments
# 8   Posted: Sep 5 2021, 11:14 PM
RAN - Your Torca was so cute which made the end even sadder!

FLYTEE - Loved your choice of colors here :D

TheCydork
Artist
581 comments
# 7   Posted: Sep 4 2021, 08:55 PM
How serendipitous two mute characters got to fight!

Ran - Love the choice of colours here! I would never have thought to put green and pink together, but the vibrant pink (and blue at the end) really makes this. The combo also made the characters very clear visually. The ending confused me, I’m not sure why NN floor stab killed Torca or what he meant by running out of ideas, but the imagery was very cool.

Flytee - Great palette that really gave off those night vibes, and cute comic overall :) It’s fun seeing Torca just vibing and inadvertently causing havoc. Some of the panels didn’t seem to have much movement, like when Torca pecks NN or when NN fell, but the last page had fantastic motion with the sword. Also, those thumbnails T.T

SnowyMoth
Artist
123 comments
# 6   Posted: Sep 4 2021, 05:07 PM
These were both so good, I'm sad one of them is gonna die. ;; w ;;

I really loved the unlucky streak that everyone was having in ran2's comic, it was fun to look through the background to see what else was happening. Torca tossing some crisps on NN's body is really just the ultimate mood, though.

 

PutridVodka
Artist
102 comments
# 5   Posted: Sep 4 2021, 02:42 PM
Ranzombie:
OFF this hurt to read (but in a good way). I'm happy to see you step out of your comfort zone and try your hand at color! Really loved the stylized look you went with this time. Really love the first page in which Torca is on top of the panels. A very heartwarming story that ends up in tragedy. I feel terrible for both of them, it was a promising friendship that was cut off way too soon :(

Flytee:
That is a very very lovely and clever use of light! Really liked how perfectly you portrayed night time without making it overly dark. Torca is absolutely adorable, I found it hilarious how they never stopped munching for a second even when getting attacked- the last panel is definitely my favorite!

Very very good round overall!

Frazzler
Artist
34 comments
# 4   Posted: Sep 4 2021, 07:32 AM
Ranzombie: This was a great way to represent Torca's ability. It made for a very cute story (well, until the end). I didn't feel like the colours all married up too well. I think the character colours could have been made to compliment the respective BG colours a bit more. The deep blue used to represent the ice also felt more indicative of deep water to me. Really nice comic!

Flytee: This was really good. You went for some really strong and difficult poses here, and there's a confidence throughout. Your anatomy looks well on the way but could do with some tightening in places-but I wouldn't worry at all. Really great choice of colour. Every secondary colour you chose looked amazing with that purple.

PyrasTerran
Global Moderator
1493 comments
# 3   Posted: Sep 3 2021, 07:09 PM
Ranzombie: Pretty solid! There's a few moments where the linework is polished but a few where it doesn't hold up as well that are a bit noticeable

Flytee: Also solid! I appreciated the creative unluck

Just solid all around guys hot damn

Reecer6
Artist
343 comments
# 2   Posted: Sep 3 2021, 01:44 PM
ran: cute! i gotta admit though i totally got the ending wrong until it was explained to me; i thought the blue sword stuff was denoting a timeskip, and was just like a mourning thing they were doing later, and the skewered torca was metaphorical, and also "i ran out of ideas" was you the author speaking about your comic? really got off the beaten path there i guess

flytee: ough this is a wonderful fight, love to watch someone just eat shoot apropros of nothing!

snager
Artist
209 comments
# 1   Posted: Sep 3 2021, 11:33 AM
OH man. N/n is just such a cool character and Torca is such a solid concept.

ran2 i like how you set up Torca's powers, but I guess the ending is that N/n was unlucky  to have lost their new friend? pretty sad, man. i think you could have done without the text at the end, because everything read just fine without it.

Flytee, I really see Torca's angle, now. they kicked N/n's ass and you still  made N/n look cool! the art is pretty dang solid for 3 days work and writing. very impressive. u ,u

Comic Details -

 
Type: Speed Death Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 3 weeks
Ended: Sep 5th, 2021
Votes Cast: 32
Page Views: 346
Winner: Flytee
 

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