Intro Story / Cowbell
Critiques & Comments
# 8
Posted:
Sep 4 2021, 11:23 AM
Thanks Fluff!!
# 7
Posted:
Aug 29 2021, 12:17 PM
This was awesome! That groin kick was satisfying. Love the colorfully greasy background you created for this. Also that skukk character is adorable
# 6
Posted:
Aug 29 2021, 10:36 AM
Thanks Cy! I tried to make the pop-our panels flow as best as possible, but I agree it got a little chaotic toward the middle. I like experimenting with the layouts, so I'll find that balance eventually!
Thanks Platinum and Wilsoninc!
Thanks Platinum and Wilsoninc!
# 5
Posted:
Aug 29 2021, 12:38 AM
Nicely put together, enjoyed the creative designs.
# 4
Posted:
Aug 28 2021, 02:35 PM
Congrats on getting your character in!!! Welcome to Void and I hope you have you fun here as well as learn a thing or two in the process of comic battles. It was neat seeing this one from beginning to end! and I'm super glad that you decided to give enterVoid a chance when I was talking about it in Random City. Hopefully you will be able to expand your characters and creative process, can't wait for my spot in line when I get to battle cowbell!
# 3
Posted:
Aug 26 2021, 07:27 PM
Congrats on getting Cowbell in! It’s been a ride seeing him progress onto Void and holy fuck the quality here is damn near professional. The panel arrangements, SFX, spot blacks, this is just a great looking comic. Also dug the tooth-shaped panels. Great as an intro too, you showed Cowbell’s personality very well!
Something I did notice was the tendency for pop-out panels which, while cool in moderation, can mess with the flow and confuse the direction of action. On page 3 for example, there’s so much going on that isn’t contained and I found myself reading some of the action backwards. The placement of the bubbles on page 2 also makes the order seem backwards, and reading the correct order isn’t intuitive; “is your boss a clown” seems to move directly into “Upper management” since they’re so close together. I can show you what I mean better with visuals, if you don’t mind me slapping a red arrow on your work?
Having said that, I wanna reiterate, this is crazy good for an intro comic. Excited to see what you make in the future!
Something I did notice was the tendency for pop-out panels which, while cool in moderation, can mess with the flow and confuse the direction of action. On page 3 for example, there’s so much going on that isn’t contained and I found myself reading some of the action backwards. The placement of the bubbles on page 2 also makes the order seem backwards, and reading the correct order isn’t intuitive; “is your boss a clown” seems to move directly into “Upper management” since they’re so close together. I can show you what I mean better with visuals, if you don’t mind me slapping a red arrow on your work?
Having said that, I wanna reiterate, this is crazy good for an intro comic. Excited to see what you make in the future!
# 2
Posted:
Aug 26 2021, 05:27 PM
Haha thanks Snager! You knew the comic went up before I did!!
# 1
Posted:
Aug 26 2021, 03:46 PM
damn, dude. this is SO extra. You know you're going to be asked to achieve this level of excellence for the rest of your void days, right?
apparently I knew Cowbell went live before OP. I sensed a pressure in the force. a new stoner with an afro had arrived. I want dibs.. but.. am I strong enough?
I have been waiting for monnnnnnnnnths. I can't let this opportunity pass me by.
I like the panels that are shaped like teeth. so creative. so traumatizing.
apparently I knew Cowbell went live before OP. I sensed a pressure in the force. a new stoner with an afro had arrived. I want dibs.. but.. am I strong enough?
I have been waiting for monnnnnnnnnths. I can't let this opportunity pass me by.
I like the panels that are shaped like teeth. so creative. so traumatizing.
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