Fel, looks good man, but I know it can be waaaaay better.  Lookin forward to the real stuff.  Keep bringin it. WOOT!

*crosses arms and nods all teacher-like* Hmm...your direction and camera angles are getting better, especially the second page. Anatomy looks excellent, except maybe his stance on the first page. Your style fits Rijin very well ! What you may want to work on now is fixing some of your frames and action direction (i.e., the last couple frames of the 2nd page. Too much open space, and the attack could have been better portrayed), but otherwise, this is some great work ! I'll be looking forward to our eventual rematch !

its ricky
MY CHARACTER LOOKS SICK
im loving it

i tried to get it scanned but the computer that i was using fucked me up but i have to get a rematch so i can post up the one i did so u guys can see it
but still my bad that i didnt get it in on time
sorri bro

its me ricky
im sorri i didnt hand in my art work in time, my bad but im loving how u introduced my character

very cool, fel
nice effects on the water and such..
i personally like the way you did Rijin, seeing as mine were much sketchier and dirtier. good stuff, man.

thanks for making it and same to you, hope i do your guy justice

yo, thanks for taking up my challenge, good luck