The Devil is in the Details / Dr. Evelin Josef vs. Aleyda

The Devil is in the Details — Dr. Evelin Josef vs. Aleyda

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Icon for Dr. Evelin Josef42.1%
217 points
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Crit level: No critique desired, comments encouraged
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This comic has been rated suitable for teens and up by its creator(s)

Icon for Aleyda57.9%
299 points
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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
Well, I’m never gonna do that again… oh hey look another 24 hour battle!
tags: aleyda, buggypumpkin, dr. evelin josef, invader diz




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snager
Artist
415 comments
# 12   Posted: Aug 19 2021, 10:55 PM
wow, that was high entertainment value for a 24 hour battle! and such a great Idea for a couple of characters who need to go at it!

Snowy
Artist
242 comments
# 11   Posted: Aug 13 2021, 07:08 AM
People who do 24 hour comics are so brave, good work to the both of you!


Buggy - I like what you had, the story seemed really interesting! I wish we could have seen more finished panels, but I love what you had.

Diz - I like the poses you used, especially for when Aleyda is in flight, and it looks like your panelling is improving, so good work! I do have a crit and that is that it feels like you made the story first and shoe-horned Evelin in, because she feels very out of character to me in this.

Rivana
Artist
367 comments
# 10   Posted: Aug 13 2021, 06:37 AM
Grats on the 24 hr battle. Buggy, I love where you were going with this. Sorry you didn't get to finish. Your finished sketches were looking good though. I see some improvement from you.

Diz - I never thought of putting Aleyda and Evelin against each other but with this fight, it makes perfect sense. I hope to see an ongoing rivalry.

Again, grats on you both for jumping in and doing a 24 hr battle. I am not brave enough for this lol.

Fluffsamasprime
Artist
568 comments
# 9   Posted: Aug 11 2021, 10:29 AM
24hr's are always tough but fun!

alberto311
Artist
374 comments
# 8   Posted: Aug 10 2021, 07:20 PM
Wow....! Awesome.

InvaderDiz
Artist
87 comments
# 7   Posted: Aug 10 2021, 07:47 AM
Haha, yeah you right!

Lucky Nothin
Artist
53 comments
# 6   Posted: Aug 10 2021, 02:54 AM
nice try from the both of you for a 24 hr comic, that rush is difficult!

buggy: neat to see evelin being evil

diz: simple but effective, on page 8 the way the two ladies are drawn relative to the ground made evelin look super tiny lol

InvaderDiz
Artist
87 comments
# 5   Posted: Aug 9 2021, 07:59 PM
I was afraid of that.

TheCydork
Artist
606 comments
# 4   Posted: Aug 9 2021, 07:43 PM
Buggy - Interesting hook, in the finished lineart your style also seems to be much more polished.

Diz - Pretty solid for a 24 hour comic! Complete story, consistent level of finish, also 11 pages is quite a lot.

Crits: Aleyda’s mouth was kinda confusing to me; I think the black part was her bottom lip but it doesn’t always read as such, sometimes seeming more like an open mouth. I’m not sure if this is a hazard of a fairly toony style or if colour would have fixed this though. The blocky standard font for sound effects like “SUMMON” took me out of the comic too.

InvaderDiz
Artist
87 comments
# 3   Posted: Aug 9 2021, 03:25 PM
Hey that was cool. I really like that if you read Buggy first then mine, it could almost be one story!

Footini
Artist
359 comments
# 2   Posted: Aug 7 2021, 02:55 PM
Time for some good old fashioned sin!

Platinumartist
Approval Committee
177 comments
# 1   Posted: Aug 7 2021, 11:13 AM
Oh neat! I can't wait to see how this battle turns out!

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Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Aug 16th, 2021
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