People who do 24 hour comics are so brave, good work to the both of you!
Buggy - I like what you had, the story seemed really interesting! I wish we could have seen more finished panels, but I love what you had.
Diz - I like the poses you used, especially for when Aleyda is in flight, and it looks like your panelling is improving, so good work! I do have a crit and that is that it feels like you made the story first and shoe-horned Evelin in, because she feels very out of character to me in this.
The Devil is in the Details / Dr. Evelin Josef vs. Aleyda
Critiques & Comments
# 11
Posted:
Aug 13 2021, 07:08 AM
# 10
Posted:
Aug 13 2021, 06:37 AM
Grats on the 24 hr battle. Buggy, I love where you were going with this. Sorry you didn't get to finish. Your finished sketches were looking good though. I see some improvement from you.
Diz - I never thought of putting Aleyda and Evelin against each other but with this fight, it makes perfect sense. I hope to see an ongoing rivalry.
Again, grats on you both for jumping in and doing a 24 hr battle. I am not brave enough for this lol.
Diz - I never thought of putting Aleyda and Evelin against each other but with this fight, it makes perfect sense. I hope to see an ongoing rivalry.
Again, grats on you both for jumping in and doing a 24 hr battle. I am not brave enough for this lol.
# 9
Posted:
Aug 11 2021, 10:29 AM
24hr's are always tough but fun!
# 8
Posted:
Aug 10 2021, 07:20 PM
Wow....! Awesome.
# 7
Posted:
Aug 10 2021, 07:47 AM
Haha, yeah you right!
# 6
Posted:
Aug 10 2021, 02:54 AM
nice try from the both of you for a 24 hr comic, that rush is difficult!
buggy: neat to see evelin being evil
diz: simple but effective, on page 8 the way the two ladies are drawn relative to the ground made evelin look super tiny lol
buggy: neat to see evelin being evil
diz: simple but effective, on page 8 the way the two ladies are drawn relative to the ground made evelin look super tiny lol
# 5
Posted:
Aug 9 2021, 07:59 PM
I was afraid of that.
# 4
Posted:
Aug 9 2021, 07:43 PM
Buggy - Interesting hook, in the finished lineart your style also seems to be much more polished.
Diz - Pretty solid for a 24 hour comic! Complete story, consistent level of finish, also 11 pages is quite a lot.
Crits: Aleyda’s mouth was kinda confusing to me; I think the black part was her bottom lip but it doesn’t always read as such, sometimes seeming more like an open mouth. I’m not sure if this is a hazard of a fairly toony style or if colour would have fixed this though. The blocky standard font for sound effects like “SUMMON” took me out of the comic too.
Diz - Pretty solid for a 24 hour comic! Complete story, consistent level of finish, also 11 pages is quite a lot.
Crits: Aleyda’s mouth was kinda confusing to me; I think the black part was her bottom lip but it doesn’t always read as such, sometimes seeming more like an open mouth. I’m not sure if this is a hazard of a fairly toony style or if colour would have fixed this though. The blocky standard font for sound effects like “SUMMON” took me out of the comic too.
# 3
Posted:
Aug 9 2021, 03:25 PM
Hey that was cool. I really like that if you read Buggy first then mine, it could almost be one story!
# 2
Posted:
Aug 7 2021, 02:55 PM
Time for some good old fashioned sin!
# 1
Posted:
Aug 7 2021, 11:13 AM
Oh neat! I can't wait to see how this battle turns out!
Regular Match
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1 week
Ended:
Aug 16th, 2021
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17
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