I like the style and the colors in this-- I'd just say mind the 180rule! On page two Ancelin is on the right side (which also helps to show her as more 'powerful' in frame) and it suddenly switches on page three to Jaja on the right, and then switches back on page five. It's a bit distracting so be more mindful of that.. But this comic is a great intro, I like Ancelin's queenly gardens for private conversations and relaxing, really cool setting imho!

The comic does look a little rushed - which is understandable since you wanted to get this out before V-Cup - but it still came out looking nice I like the limited colors you used, and think it's an interesting premise that you have set up for Jaja to use!

Also I agree with Fluff - Hana's ears should have taken up at -least- the entire page. >;P

The fact you were able to get this out this quickly and making it look this good is a feat all in itself and I commend you for it! This is a great way to hype up V-Cup, and I wish you the best of luck!

This is really going above and beyond for The Super V-Cup! Can't wait to see how your entry comes out!

Well done! 😊

Love the extra mile of doing a prologue for Jaja for VCup. I am also very intrigued on what this means for Greece once they cross paths. And my wandering mind is playing around with a Xia vs Jaja battle. Ignore me, I am just giddy lol

Art is also looking good. Great job.

my one crit is hana's ears are not big enough, they should take up the entire page

Fight me Footini! In the ring! Septober 9th or something!

This was fun! I liked the spotlight-esque background on the first page and the solid colour + screentone looks for the characters. I thought the speech bubbles could have been neater but still, great work for a week.

JAJA MY QUEEN! You think you can take me down? Come for me, I'm ready! >=D

I'm into it 😊

I love the utter confidence you gave Ancelin, that was very well done. I want to say I wish JaJa's personality shone through more, but I think this works as an intro to the event that's really going to highlight her more. The call to action isn't where the hero shines, it's during the main conflict. So hyped for V Cup!

Aw hell yeah this was dope. Love some Jaja, love some spectacular colors. Love me some vague government funded super hero teams.