Intro Story / Captain Lunch Box, The Cat, Mustard

Intro Story / Captain Lunch Box, The Cat, Mustard

Intro Story — Captain Lunch Box, The Cat, Mustard

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TheCydork
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# 7   Posted: Jul 31 2021, 11:09 PM
Congrats on getting in! Like Rivana said, this is a great setup for Shenanigans (TM) as Captain Lunchbox pays off the repairs. I hope you develop Mustard’s restaurant (?) a bit more in future comics; right now it’s just an empty yellow box. Where are the tables, chairs, windows, etc? The poster was a good start but it isn’t enough for a background.

Rivana
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326 comments
# 6   Posted: Jul 30 2021, 06:24 AM
This is so cute and a nice set up for fun stories. I somehow imagine a competition between Musterds (was the misspelling intentional?) and Rensga's pizza now.

I blame The Cat for everything XD.

Animeshen
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1405 comments
# 5   Posted: Jul 26 2021, 02:00 PM
This is so charming and wholesome! theres already a lot of characters i'd love to see you fight!

SnowyMoth
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123 comments
# 4   Posted: Jul 26 2021, 09:50 AM
Congrats on getting in! I'm interested in what kind of stories you'll be telling with these characters! : )

snager
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207 comments
# 3   Posted: Jul 25 2021, 09:48 PM
these guys are so unusual. I'm trying to figure out how one of my characters could effectively  battle them. THINKING EMOJI?
Maybe they are children's book characters? children's book universe?

anyway, congrats on getting in! I remember seeing some of these concepts on the discord incubator, and it's so nice to see them fully developed. and you managed to squeeze in a cameo as well? so soon? props.

Fluffsamasprime
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299 comments
# 2   Posted: Jul 25 2021, 11:18 AM
Congrats on getting in! Welcome to the comic battlefields!

Platinumartist
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87 comments
# 1   Posted: Jul 25 2021, 02:50 AM
Great job on getting your Intro Comic done!!!

Can't wait to see who's your first opponent will be and how your Void Stories will unfold!

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