Star Girl: Issue #1 / Brittany Marshal

Star Girl: Issue #1 / Brittany Marshal

Star Girl: Issue #1 — Brittany Marshal

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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
A little something Brittany’s mom held onto from Brittany’s childhood. Enjoy.
tags: brittany marshal, invader diz, star girl, team captain




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InvaderDiz
Artist
60 comments
# 9   Posted: Jul 23 2021, 10:08 PM
I’m really happy that you picked up on the eraser marks. I figured the scrunched letters would be easy to tell but I was afraid the erased pencil would come off as accidentally sloppy instead of intentionally sloppy. Happy that worked out.

TheCydork
Artist
525 comments
# 8   Posted: Jul 23 2021, 08:12 PM
This was super cute. I love touches like the clearly erased and redrawn parts, and the STAR GIRL title getting smaller and scrunched to the right when it appears, I think we’ve all pulled the “Too Big Starting Letters” thing as kids. I agree with Fluff and Snowy though, having Brittany react to it or something would have upped this comic.

Pizza Man
Artist
41 comments
# 7   Posted: Jul 23 2021, 09:22 AM
This feels like a personal attack on my 9 year old self right down to the 6 window pane style paneling and various typos. All it's missing is running out of black marker and having to use a blue marker and hoping nobody notices (but everybody does).

SnowyMoth
Artist
91 comments
# 6   Posted: Jul 20 2021, 08:02 PM
I agree with Fluff, it would have been nice to have another style to balance the crayon only style. It's cute, but also feels like you wanted to hurry through the comic. It's nice to see more comics from you!

Fluffsamasprime
Artist
243 comments
# 5   Posted: Jul 18 2021, 06:36 PM
Theres something so nostalgic about this. It really does make me think back to drawing with crayons as a kid.
One thing I would have liked to have seen was something showing Brittany reading or finding this old comic and reacting to it. Just to see something other than the crayon.
It's still cute and charming and stirs up fond memories or childhood. (I wish I drew and colored like this as a kid though!)

InvaderDiz
Artist
60 comments
# 4   Posted: Jul 18 2021, 06:13 PM
Another vibe I was going for. Really dug deep into that 12 yo Diz brain for this one 😂

Cab
Artist
115 comments
# 3   Posted: Jul 18 2021, 05:17 PM
This reminds me of the comics I made when I was 9yrs old, scratch that these are better cuz it has much better writing, lol

But good stuff, I enjoyed it.

InvaderDiz
Artist
60 comments
# 2   Posted: Jul 18 2021, 11:12 AM
Thanks, that’s sort of the vibe I was going for.

RamenBean18
Artist
6 comments
# 1   Posted: Jul 18 2021, 08:41 AM
Super cute! Reminds me of power puff girls, XD can’t wait to see where this goes! ☺️

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