Star Girl: Issue #1 / Brittany Marshal

Star Girl: Issue #1 — Brittany Marshal

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A little something Brittany’s mom held onto from Brittany’s childhood. Enjoy.
tags: brittany marshal, invader diz, star girl, team captain




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Rivana
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367 comments
# 11   Posted: Jul 26 2021, 06:54 AM
This is really cute and I really love the Jack cameo. Excuse me while I parrot what the others already said  (I typed this whole bit before reading back on the comments lawl) - While I know there is a part 2, I think the story would've felt more complete and delivered better if we got the  resolution in one go showing that this is Brittany's hand-drawn comic when she was a child. Right now it is just an (obvious) assumption from the readers. I would've loved to see what her thoughts are now that she is an adult or is this her digging through her old stash and reminiscing.

Either way, it's good start for an in depth look of the character!

snager
Artist
415 comments
# 10   Posted: Jul 25 2021, 09:46 PM
My only problem with the style is that I can tell it's digital. Even if you didn't have the supplies at home, there are digital brushes and textures that make a more crayon-line effect. IDK, maybe that would have messed with visual clarity?

I like the idea of showing that Brittany always wanted to be a super hero, though. Did she continue making these until your manga-ka phase in middleschool? and her newgrounds webcomic phase in highschool?

InvaderDiz
Artist
87 comments
# 9   Posted: Jul 23 2021, 10:08 PM
I’m really happy that you picked up on the eraser marks. I figured the scrunched letters would be easy to tell but I was afraid the erased pencil would come off as accidentally sloppy instead of intentionally sloppy. Happy that worked out.

TheCydork
Artist
606 comments
# 8   Posted: Jul 23 2021, 08:12 PM
This was super cute. I love touches like the clearly erased and redrawn parts, and the STAR GIRL title getting smaller and scrunched to the right when it appears, I think we’ve all pulled the “Too Big Starting Letters” thing as kids. I agree with Fluff and Snowy though, having Brittany react to it or something would have upped this comic.

Pizza Man
Artist
77 comments
# 7   Posted: Jul 23 2021, 09:22 AM
This feels like a personal attack on my 9 year old self right down to the 6 window pane style paneling and various typos. All it's missing is running out of black marker and having to use a blue marker and hoping nobody notices (but everybody does).

Snowy
Artist
243 comments
# 6   Posted: Jul 20 2021, 08:02 PM
I agree with Fluff, it would have been nice to have another style to balance the crayon only style. It's cute, but also feels like you wanted to hurry through the comic. It's nice to see more comics from you!

Fluffsamasprime
Artist
568 comments
# 5   Posted: Jul 18 2021, 06:36 PM
Theres something so nostalgic about this. It really does make me think back to drawing with crayons as a kid.
One thing I would have liked to have seen was something showing Brittany reading or finding this old comic and reacting to it. Just to see something other than the crayon.
It's still cute and charming and stirs up fond memories or childhood. (I wish I drew and colored like this as a kid though!)

InvaderDiz
Artist
87 comments
# 4   Posted: Jul 18 2021, 06:13 PM
Another vibe I was going for. Really dug deep into that 12 yo Diz brain for this one 😂

Cab
Artist
153 comments
# 3   Posted: Jul 18 2021, 05:17 PM
This reminds me of the comics I made when I was 9yrs old, scratch that these are better cuz it has much better writing, lol

But good stuff, I enjoyed it.

InvaderDiz
Artist
87 comments
# 2   Posted: Jul 18 2021, 11:12 AM
Thanks, that’s sort of the vibe I was going for.

RamenBean18
Artist
89 comments
# 1   Posted: Jul 18 2021, 08:41 AM
Super cute! Reminds me of power puff girls, XD can’t wait to see where this goes! ☺️

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