Star Girl: Issue #1 / Brittany Marshal

Star Girl: Issue #1 / Brittany Marshal

Star Girl: Issue #1 — Brittany Marshal

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A little something Brittany’s mom held onto from Brittany’s childhood. Enjoy.
tags: brittany marshal, invader diz, star girl, team captain




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Rivana
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326 comments
# 11   Posted: Jul 26 2021, 06:54 AM
This is really cute and I really love the Jack cameo. Excuse me while I parrot what the others already said  (I typed this whole bit before reading back on the comments lawl) - While I know there is a part 2, I think the story would've felt more complete and delivered better if we got the  resolution in one go showing that this is Brittany's hand-drawn comic when she was a child. Right now it is just an (obvious) assumption from the readers. I would've loved to see what her thoughts are now that she is an adult or is this her digging through her old stash and reminiscing.

Either way, it's good start for an in depth look of the character!

snager
Artist
205 comments
# 10   Posted: Jul 25 2021, 09:46 PM
My only problem with the style is that I can tell it's digital. Even if you didn't have the supplies at home, there are digital brushes and textures that make a more crayon-line effect. IDK, maybe that would have messed with visual clarity?

I like the idea of showing that Brittany always wanted to be a super hero, though. Did she continue making these until your manga-ka phase in middleschool? and her newgrounds webcomic phase in highschool?

InvaderDiz
Artist
67 comments
# 9   Posted: Jul 23 2021, 10:08 PM
I’m really happy that you picked up on the eraser marks. I figured the scrunched letters would be easy to tell but I was afraid the erased pencil would come off as accidentally sloppy instead of intentionally sloppy. Happy that worked out.

TheCydork
Artist
581 comments
# 8   Posted: Jul 23 2021, 08:12 PM
This was super cute. I love touches like the clearly erased and redrawn parts, and the STAR GIRL title getting smaller and scrunched to the right when it appears, I think we’ve all pulled the “Too Big Starting Letters” thing as kids. I agree with Fluff and Snowy though, having Brittany react to it or something would have upped this comic.

Pizza Man
Artist
41 comments
# 7   Posted: Jul 23 2021, 09:22 AM
This feels like a personal attack on my 9 year old self right down to the 6 window pane style paneling and various typos. All it's missing is running out of black marker and having to use a blue marker and hoping nobody notices (but everybody does).

SnowyMoth
Artist
123 comments
# 6   Posted: Jul 20 2021, 08:02 PM
I agree with Fluff, it would have been nice to have another style to balance the crayon only style. It's cute, but also feels like you wanted to hurry through the comic. It's nice to see more comics from you!

Fluffsamasprime
Artist
295 comments
# 5   Posted: Jul 18 2021, 06:36 PM
Theres something so nostalgic about this. It really does make me think back to drawing with crayons as a kid.
One thing I would have liked to have seen was something showing Brittany reading or finding this old comic and reacting to it. Just to see something other than the crayon.
It's still cute and charming and stirs up fond memories or childhood. (I wish I drew and colored like this as a kid though!)

InvaderDiz
Artist
67 comments
# 4   Posted: Jul 18 2021, 06:13 PM
Another vibe I was going for. Really dug deep into that 12 yo Diz brain for this one 😂

Cab
Artist
120 comments
# 3   Posted: Jul 18 2021, 05:17 PM
This reminds me of the comics I made when I was 9yrs old, scratch that these are better cuz it has much better writing, lol

But good stuff, I enjoyed it.

InvaderDiz
Artist
67 comments
# 2   Posted: Jul 18 2021, 11:12 AM
Thanks, that’s sort of the vibe I was going for.

RamenBean18
Artist
21 comments
# 1   Posted: Jul 18 2021, 08:41 AM
Super cute! Reminds me of power puff girls, XD can’t wait to see where this goes! ☺️

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