NDA- The Flower Maiden / Art Mishra

NDA- The Flower Maiden — Art Mishra

by Flytee

This comic has been rated suitable for all ages by its creator(s)

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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
Messed around with different brushes here, not everything is successful, but I quite like the last page!

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Flytee
Artist
308 comments
# 7   Posted: Jul 19 2021, 03:28 AM
Thanks for the kind words, everyone.
I'd like to make more short NDA comics in the future.

TheCydork
Artist
597 comments
# 6   Posted: Jul 18 2021, 09:08 PM
I liked the black and white traditional-looking style you had on the first page, it gave a great texture and vibe to the statue especially. The watercolour-sequel borders looked a bit messy to me though, and the last page kinda felt like it was coloured with felt markers running out of ink? If that’s the look you were going for, you nailed it, but for me it yeeted me back to school days.  

Short as it was I liked the story here! It’s kind of refreshing to get a depiction of supernatural encounters that aren’t malevolent or big exciting events. Sometimes they’re just baffling, and that’s it.

Rivana
Artist
350 comments
# 5   Posted: Jul 18 2021, 05:06 PM
Love this short and sweet comic with a simple yet profound message. I am especially impressed that even with the black and white prior pages, I can still tell the  difference  between the statue and the live person (Art).  

Again, Flytee you never disappoint. Looking forward to more as always :)

snager
Artist
355 comments
# 4   Posted: Jul 13 2021, 06:58 PM
I loved that, Flytee~! And it's good to see an example of the kind of funky stuff our NDA characters should be getting up to.

Snowy
Artist
177 comments
# 3   Posted: Jul 13 2021, 04:07 PM
I really loved the art and the story, how you made something so mundane feel so magical was really nice~ : )

ArtsandGoodies
Community Manager
566 comments
# 2   Posted: Jul 13 2021, 01:42 PM
That was a short and beautiful comic and it's great how you can do it in such a short amount of pages/

Platinumartist
Artist
141 comments
# 1   Posted: Jul 12 2021, 11:21 AM
It is always a pleasure to see your works and your artstyle, it is a fun joyous type of vibe that I pick up from your style on lines and shapes. The economic use of color up until the last page was pretty nice making it a flashback type of story which is fine with me! I thoroughly enjoyed the splash paged in the beginning cause it set up the comic so it can get right into its story.

Great Job and I can't wait to see more in the near future

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Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Jul 18th, 2021
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