Dairyu vs. Rickter & Gus

Dairyu vs. Rickter & Gus

Dairyu vs. Rickter & Gus

This comic has been rated suitable for all ages by its creator(s)

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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
Thanks so much to Fluff for battling me, and thanks to Rivana for convincing Fluff to accept my challenge! I had a lot of fun!
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This comic has been rated adults only by its creator(s)

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Crit level: No critique desired, comments encouraged
I just wanted to ship!
Thumbnail image was made by Footini!
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TheCydork
Artist
581 comments
# 17   Posted: Jul 28 2021, 11:01 PM
FINALLY they battle! :D

Snowy - Ugh I love Dairyu. She gives off such a smug energy but in an appealing way if that makes sense? Idk she’s clearly confident in her abilities and she’s just so smooth with her taunts lmao. I also dig this lavender colour you used for the background. Great fighting and panelling, I think the camera could have been pulled back a little though as I don’t get the sense they’re in the big, colosseum-like space that the arena was shown to be. Interested to see what this cult business is all about!

Fluff - Did Dairyu just pull the old “puts sword in sheath then cut appears” on Rickter? Excellent. Great pop out panels too, especially on page 6, great flow from Rickter to Dairyu’s sword . Also woah the ending! I knew this was adults only but Mamma Mia that was spicy!

Fluffsamasprime
Artist
295 comments
# 16   Posted: Jul 28 2021, 01:03 PM
Thanks for all the comments and votes!
I had a lot of fun with this even if it came out a lil rushed. Thank you Snowy for battle me and thank you Riv for getting me to go after Snowy. I'm so happy to finally have this ship set sail. There will be more of both of them! I cannot wait for Snowy's epilogue

Rivana
Artist
326 comments
# 15   Posted: Jul 28 2021, 06:11 AM
I am so glad this ship is finally sailing!! THANK YOU FOR THIS BATTLE!

Snowy - Your art is so nice and crisp and steadily improving. I was just in awe  at how beautiful your inks are. I'll have to echo that I had difficulty following the story at first but second read through cleared things up for me!! Maybe switching to something other than light purple or adding a punch of red/orange/yellow  would've helped the tense more action packed situation deliver. But darn, how do you do such clean art (I am still not over that lol). I really need to know this secret.


Fluff - Your story was much easier to follow for me overall.  The art is cute too and I had fun looking for Dairyu in those stalking panels. Bob seems  to be getting  quite popular in the arena and that amuses me. I do hope to  see more polished works from you though, some panels feels rushed but I commend you to not sacrificing clarity with them which is a great skill to have. And whoa that ending was so unexpected! Love it!

Dairyu's Tsundere energy has such great chemistry with Rickter's Trash Man personality. I def hope to see more of these two in more shenanigans. I did hear that there is an epilogue coming up so I'll be looking forward to that!

snager
Artist
205 comments
# 14   Posted: Jul 27 2021, 10:42 AM
nice of yall to add lore but when is the smut battle coming out?

i joke. but also these stories don't really explain why Rickter and Dairyu immediately just want to smash. is it a love at first sight kinda thing?

snowy critique: I had trouble following your fight choreography, but that's not as big a deal as when I was trying to figure out what was going on leading up TO the fight and what was happening just after. on the re-read, I take it that Dairyu was following Rickter, but for her own reasons. then she was randomly informed by a stranger that she needed to go to the arena to fight him. after the fight, she meets someone who works for a church/cult. I guess they threatened her so she killed them.

I'm having a hard time separating the two stories in my head: is Rickter on the run from the cult in BOTH versions or just on Fluff's side? I was thinking he was on the run but also investigating the cult, too. But that seems like a bad idea, if he's into self preservation.

in Fluff's version of events, it's more clear that Dairyu has been hired to track down Rickter. then when they catch up to him, he acts like Dairyu is already his buddy and Dairyu acts like she immediately doesn't work for the cult any more. is it because they just paid her in cake? that's rough, buddy. imagine being paid in one (1) cake for pulling a double shift.

why buy the cake when you can get it at home for free? Why is the cake free? we don't ask questions, we just consume the cake.

in this metaphor : the cake stands for Rickter's ass.

SnowyMoth
Artist
123 comments
# 13   Posted: Jul 26 2021, 09:51 PM
Thank you for the comments, everyone who has, and I appreciate your critique, Shen! I'm still getting used to drawing action scenes and it's nice to know what I need to improve on.

And thank you again for battling me Fluff, I really loved your side and also want to do more comics with these two nerds. : )

Platinumartist
Artist
86 comments
# 12   Posted: Jul 25 2021, 02:51 AM
Both Stories had solid lineworks and entertaining stories!

Loved both of them and I believe I already told you guys how well you did in a call but I will say again that I was enthralled by both stories. they are great reads and I hope to see more of these two in the near future!

Animeshen
Artist
1405 comments
# 11   Posted: Jul 24 2021, 12:27 PM
WHOOOO I been waitin for these!!
SNOWY: Gorgeous lines as always, your inks are so lovely and flowing, they really match your character! I gotta admit tho the fight scene was a little hard to follow. Like on panel 3 page 6 is the sword moving towards him, or just stopped midair? I think maybe this could have used some like... speedlines or hitsparks or sound effects, something to make it feel more energized and alive. i LOVE the panel layouts though, very dynamic! I love what a coy little flirt she is at the end~
FLUFF: ok i said this in chat but that epilogue hit me like a truck XD I wont elaborate since I see you aren't open to crit so I'll just say I love to see more Rickter and his story and his excellent expressions when he gets to fight, I wanna see more!

FINALLY THIS SHIP IS SETTING SAIL

Natamoon123
Artist
6 comments
# 10   Posted: Jul 23 2021, 03:21 PM
I'm excited to see more omg

Jade★
Council
1080 comments
# 9   Posted: Jul 22 2021, 10:16 PM
I have zero emotional energy for comics but I loved both of these. I look forward to more!!!!!

InvaderDiz
Artist
67 comments
# 8   Posted: Jul 22 2021, 04:11 PM
Clean. Clean comics.
Snowy those colors were super cool.

Fluffsamasprime
Artist
295 comments
# 7   Posted: Jul 22 2021, 01:42 PM
Yoooo! Snowy! These action scenes! Everything! This ship happening! And ye! I want to do more bbs with these two so much!

snager
Artist
205 comments
# 6   Posted: Jun 21 2021, 09:14 PM
👀 o boi, aren't these guys married in at least one universe?

Animeshen
Artist
1405 comments
# 5   Posted: Jun 19 2021, 08:57 PM
Now kiss

Jade★
Council
1080 comments
# 4   Posted: Jun 17 2021, 01:09 PM
ABOUT TIME THESE TWO BONED

Footini
Artist
318 comments
# 3   Posted: Jun 17 2021, 07:34 AM
If anything bad happens we can blame Raven

Rivana
Artist
326 comments
# 2   Posted: Jun 17 2021, 06:13 AM
I'd like to believe I made this happen. ;)

Footini
Artist
318 comments
# 1   Posted: Jun 16 2021, 10:26 PM
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