Footini: first i love this colour palette. The action is great, easy to follow and very dynamic and exciting, and giving the Oleander the ability to travel into gamespace (and possibly wifi?) is a FRIGHTENING new power for someone already so awesome. I love how you draw her too, shes a beautiful contrast to Virtua.
MrPr: firstly i love seeing this side of Virtua, the utterly and HOPELESSLY defeated one, you really take your opponent seriously and i respect that. I like the 'greater good dilemma Virtua is presented with, we never see her really consider issues like that so its refreshing. Artwise though this feels rushed. Theres little to know backgrounds (the 'gamespace' could at least have floating pixels or *something*) and towards the end Virtua's muscles look less like anatomy and more like shes covered in balloons. yu might wanna consider going back to basics about and refresh yourself with some life drawing so next time Virtua can be as imposing as she's meant to be.

Footini - Love the steady improvement that I am seeing on your art and I dig the premise that you used here. Kind of giving me Wreck it Ralph vibes for some reason.

MrPr - Good comic!  Love the ending especially!

Footini- This comic needs a Vaporwave soundtrack. I had fun- I thought the dialogue was particularly strong here, Virtua was oddly endearing. Great energetic art & some really strong page layouts. This was solid!  

Mr Pr- Nice! It was interesting seeing Oleander be so sneaky at the start of the comic...The ending was sweet, it wrapped up the comic nicely.  

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