Cool short, man! I really liked how the demon looked, it's clear that some thought went into it and it shows! Your rendition of Art is fantastic too. I liked how the ground team didn't just solve it all but they called back and got people involved elsewhere, kinda opens the scope up a bit and makes the group feel like they're part of a world, y'know? I get that it was a light hearted story but idk why the demon just straight up ressurected those kids unprompted, like why didn't you have Art or one of the team ask for them to be ressurected? It's not a big deal I guess. Your panel structure was cool as heck, I liked the how it shifted about when the forcefield started to break up, and I liked the little bit where you could see the demons hand gesturing to the ressurected kids as it pans from him to them. Your pacing throughout was pretty much perfect! Regading how you handled the characters yeah not bad, can't obviously vouch for Rikun and Flytee but Grimoire is almost on point; she'd have said everything she said but in a happier way lol. She enjoys her work and helping people, almost to an unnerving degree. Overall cool comic man, I really enjoyed it! Neat lil touch at the end with the case file, very cool.
Oh yeah one thing though
WHY IS GRIM SO SMALL?? XD
NDA Mission -- Riddles in the Dark / Professor Riley Nikola
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# 4
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May 11 2021, 03:09 PM
# 3
Posted:
May 11 2021, 10:05 AM
You and your terrible riddles!
I really like this! I love the idea of putting a monster profile at the end with its ranking.
Now I really wanna do a bb
I really like this! I love the idea of putting a monster profile at the end with its ranking.
Now I really wanna do a bb
# 2
Posted:
May 11 2021, 06:26 AM
ah that is pretty neat! I really like the pacing of the story and the interaction between the different NDA Agents. Really showing off that personality! Great job with this one and I can't wait to see the next NDA Adventure
# 1
Posted:
May 11 2021, 01:30 AM
Art looks pretty damn cool here but why does Grim look like a child??
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I adore how you drew Art and I thought you did a pretty decent job writing him as well. Oh, and that's a very interesting-looking demon, I can see you channeling Monster designs from Del toro's flicks. Nice work!