Intro Story / Charlamagne

Intro Story — Charlamagne

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RamenBean18
Artist

89 comments

# 7 Posted: May 12 2021, 07:16 PM

Congrats man!! Very butt kicking! And adorable! Can’t wait to see more! 😁 PineCone says hi!

alberto311
Artist

374 comments

# 6 Posted: May 11 2021, 12:35 PM

Keep going! I want to see more! 🤩

ArtsandGoodies
Artist

566 comments

# 5 Posted: May 10 2021, 10:39 PM

congrats on getting in, keep practicing your fundamentals and pushing yourself with future comics and you will go far.

Footini
Artist

359 comments

# 4 Posted: May 10 2021, 11:37 AM

*points to Charlemagne*

Dibs

Fluffsamasprime
Artist

570 comments

# 3 Posted: May 8 2021, 01:44 PM

You worked hard on this! Now SCAR MATCH ME!!!

TheCydork
Artist

606 comments

# 2 Posted: May 7 2021, 10:06 PM

Good job on the intro, you showcased both Charlamagne’s personality and goals very clearly here! The action was a little hard to follow though - with a limited palette, the criminals were hard to tell apart despite different clothes. Varying up their body types and faces would have helped. Still, a great first attempt, welcome to Void!

Platinumartist
Approval Committee

177 comments

# 1 Posted: May 7 2021, 10:02 PM

Violent and Fast is the only words I can only really think when it comes to this comic. The economic use of color you got here is quite interesting and it really plays up when you have the red glasses or blood on panel it pops. Great job on this one and can't wait to see your first battle here on Void!