Intro Story / PineCone

Intro Story / PineCone

Intro Story — PineCone

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Footini
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326 comments
# 7   Posted: May 15 2021, 12:53 AM
Pinecone rolling into our hearts.

ArtsandGoodies
Community Manager
557 comments
# 6   Posted: May 10 2021, 10:38 PM
congrats on getting in, i gave a full crit on the submission email but it will be cute intro and look forward to seeing how they interact with others

Fred
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549 comments
# 5   Posted: May 9 2021, 06:27 AM
the framing was confusing but we would die for this charming lil friend.

Fluffsamasprime
Artist
319 comments
# 4   Posted: May 8 2021, 02:36 PM
This was an incredibly cute intro. It's funny to see this one come out and also Rehns with its violence.
I got a question about Pinecone like do they talk, or would their dialogue all be internal?
She's really expressive and cute! I hope to see more comics soon!

Petrichor
Artist
66 comments
# 3   Posted: May 8 2021, 10:23 AM
That was such a cute intro :D
I like the color choice and overall scenery with the fireflies as the main lightsource, it's all very dream like.
I'd like to know more about the statue and the place that Pinecone comes from but you'll probably show it in future comics.
Pinecone is just too adorable congrats on getting her in!

Platinumartist
Artist
96 comments
# 2   Posted: May 7 2021, 09:59 PM
This is quite cute and you did a good job on the coloring! hopefully you learned a bit more about Comic making with your time here and can't wait to see your first battle!

Loving the expressions you have here.

TheCydork
Artist
581 comments
# 1   Posted: May 7 2021, 09:50 PM
Cute intro! I really like the purple sky you have here and the fireflies, gives a nice soft vibe. I’m interested to see your angle on Void itself, since the invitation from a stone squirrel almost makes me think of fey?

Something to keep in mind for future comics is how clear the actions are - on the second page, it took me a few seconds to register the squirrel had jumped onto Pinecone’s head. It might help to show it in the middle of the action, at the moment it connects!

Anyway, good job on this intro and welcome to Void!

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