MrPr- fun comic with big ninjas

Energy- You really got to work on your workflow.  Work a little by little a day you should be able to get something substantial done, even if it's just 2 pages.

MrPr- a little hard to follow- it took a few reads for the scenario to click in my head, which is a shame because I think with better structure and clearer paneling it could've been fun.
The art looked rushed and incomplete in parts, but it did have some enjoyable sequences- I liked the start of page 2 where we see all the stages of Shibo bouncing towards the camera.
I think working on page layouts and focusing on clarity would greatly improve the entertainment factor of your comics.

Energy- More of a template than a comic- not much I can really say.
In the future, consider halving your page count for battles so you at least have a chance to get some pencils or even inks down. I would take 1 readable page over 4 pages of outlines.  

Energy: I would have liked to have seen speech bubbles so I could know what's going on.

Mrpr: I got a little lost at parts but it was still a fun comic

Good job guys!