9 to 5 vs. Celif
Critiques & Comments
# 8
Posted:
May 12 2021, 09:26 AM
so nice to see Celif setting and achieving realistic goals and finally getting ahead in the world! We're all so proud of him, seeing his progress. UuU A DOCTOR! We're all so proud!
# 7
Posted:
May 12 2021, 07:21 AM
Wow can these 2 be any different? But you both managed to make it work and turn it into a fun story!
Fred- I like this glimpse further into 9 to 5's priorities. You'd think he's just your run of the mill accountant but it turns out his morals are a bit twisted. Makes him fit right in Void City. I noticed some typos so maybe something that you'll need to watch out for next time. I quick once over before posting should do the trick!
Fluff- The idea of Dr Celif is terrifying but knowing Void City it would just go under the VCPD's noses. And do I spy a VCV Calendar back there? Is that Raven? XDD
Fred- I like this glimpse further into 9 to 5's priorities. You'd think he's just your run of the mill accountant but it turns out his morals are a bit twisted. Makes him fit right in Void City. I noticed some typos so maybe something that you'll need to watch out for next time. I quick once over before posting should do the trick!
Fluff- The idea of Dr Celif is terrifying but knowing Void City it would just go under the VCPD's noses. And do I spy a VCV Calendar back there? Is that Raven? XDD
# 6
Posted:
May 6 2021, 09:14 PM
Fred - Woah, I think this is the first time we’ve seen 9 to 5 get mad! I love how one-track minded he is where everything flies except going against protocol. There was an awful lot of typos in here though, including whole missing words that made me really confused. I still can’t figure out what was meant by “can’t you just it under”.
Fluff - CELIF NO Anyway, love this gross texture you’ve added! It definitely gives the feel of the shady alley and then apartment Celif operates in. There’s also something really funny about white-out being illegal.
Fluff - CELIF NO Anyway, love this gross texture you’ve added! It definitely gives the feel of the shady alley and then apartment Celif operates in. There’s also something really funny about white-out being illegal.
# 5
Posted:
May 6 2021, 06:32 PM
This is pretty funny and quite entertaining to read. I like the ideas and interaction in both comics. it is super hard to choose a winner for this one!
# 4
Posted:
May 6 2021, 12:53 PM
Like the little girls said in "o brother where arth thou", Celif is now bona fide.
# 3
Posted:
May 6 2021, 11:38 AM
There is no form for tax fraud.
Therefore it is immoral.
Therefore it is immoral.
# 2
Posted:
May 6 2021, 09:11 AM
I love 925's morals. Anything's on the table so long as it's not tax fraud! Thank you Fred!
# 1
Posted:
May 6 2021, 03:14 AM
pfffff
what a perfect alley deal, well done fluffs XD
what a perfect alley deal, well done fluffs XD
Regular Match
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Ended:
May 13th, 2021
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