Intro Story / Art Mishra

Intro Story — Art Mishra

by Flytee

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Rivana
Artist
367 comments
# 10   Posted: Apr 13 2021, 05:56 AM
LATE but I voted at the time! Been busy but I wanna just say I am so glad he's in Void now! Been looking forward to his intro for awhile and it was worth the wait! Well done Flytee!

Petrichor
Artist
107 comments
# 9   Posted: Apr 8 2021, 10:42 AM
Very good intro overall! Art is so soft for a leader hahah i like him already.
I'm excited for more NDA comics and see how Art interacts with the other members!

Kozispoon
Artist
1211 comments
# 8   Posted: Apr 8 2021, 07:08 AM
A great intro that gives us a snapshot of this character and some tasty mystery tidbits besides :D I'll second and third the comments you've gotten to push the action. After a second and third read through I can see how the 'order' of your layout for the helicopter scene could sap the urgency of the situation.
I know you've been hard at work doing studies of this character and getting more comfortable, so I definitely look forward to seeing all that practice squeezed into your next comic!

ArtsandGoodies
Artist
566 comments
# 7   Posted: Apr 6 2021, 03:47 PM
Great intro and interested to see how you do this who NDA group with all these characters. i made a crit in the approval but make sure to practice your male anatomy more, in particular some studies on the arm and forearm muscles could help a bunch.

Badger
Think Tank
66 comments
# 6   Posted: Apr 3 2021, 10:48 PM
Your layouts here are awesome! I really like how the panels flow on page 1, and page 2's explosion is great along with the transition on the same page, I like how it’s punctuated by text and the bird’s cawing. Speaking of sfx, I think they’re great here as well (especially how they’re integrated into the explosion), and the texture in the narration boxes add a nice crisp bit of pop to them. I noticed page 3 has a fairly straightforward 9 panel layout, and I think this is a good choice, it adds to the impression that this is a really regular morning routine for Art. Great intro, it really makes me interested in seeing more!

Fluffsamasprime
Artist
568 comments
# 5   Posted: Apr 3 2021, 12:15 PM
I'm so excited to do more NDA! This is a great start with the fearless leader

Heathen
Artist
462 comments
# 4   Posted: Apr 1 2021, 02:21 PM
There’s a lack of drama and chaotic urgency on page 1. Tilt those panels and roughen the borders to push your action sequences.

I also really would have liked to see even a hint of what Art is looking at in the files he’s handed at the end, entice us!

Rose
Web Dev
1180 comments
# 3   Posted: Apr 1 2021, 10:41 AM
I love Art so much 😔

Literally my only critique is that you need to keep practicing male anatomy for Art, especially if you want to draw him shirtless again (please do), but I will say that I've already seen you working on that and I think you're doing great so far! Can't wait to tease Art hehe

Platinumartist
Approval Committee
177 comments
# 2   Posted: Apr 1 2021, 09:15 AM
A strong opening with that creative and artistically sound first page. the use of composition and colors are  simply wonderful!!!

the Intro also shows how this character works and it has got me hooked!

Great Job! Great Comic!

Lets see what NDA has in store for the site?

TheCydork
Artist
606 comments
# 1   Posted: Apr 1 2021, 03:33 AM
Yo this is some of the most quality stuff I’ve seen from you! I absolutely love the panel layout on the first page, how they spiral down with the plane. And that explosion on the following page? Damn. I feel like you set up both Art and the NDA very well here - Art through the visuals, especially those panels of him getting ready for work, and the NDA through his inner monologue. The speech bubbles at the end kind of threw me, as their style didn’t seem to fit with the rest of the comic (especially the tails), but the comic overall was still great :)

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