Surprise Family Reunion / Gutsmasher
Critiques & Comments
# 12
Posted:
Apr 14 2021, 06:31 AM
Petri you have a knack for making very lovable characters and writing heartwarming stories with an amazing art to match. This is no exception. Your inks are crisp and clear though I wish this being a BB they were colored or shaded a bit for that extra oomph. Still, I absolutely love this comic and I am so happy Gutsmasher is back in action! In my headcanon Rensga and (the late) Luca (he was just an NPC I created in one of Raven's BBs) were friendly pizzeria competitors so it's great to see Rensga back in business too!
# 11
Posted:
Apr 13 2021, 09:14 PM
THIS IS SO WHOLESOME! I LOVE your inks!!
# 10
Posted:
Apr 12 2021, 11:24 PM
Oh man, this is cute as hell, and so wholesome. Your expressions are just top notch. Fantastic work!
# 9
Posted:
Apr 11 2021, 10:28 PM
This is super wholesome! I'm so glad to have read it, and I hope we see more Gutsmasher in the future!
# 8
Posted:
Apr 11 2021, 04:34 PM
HI I LOVE THIS
Wholesome kaiju content is something I thrive to see.
Wholesome kaiju content is something I thrive to see.
# 7
Posted:
Apr 8 2021, 10:45 PM
This is so cute ;o; lovely to finally meet Gutsmasher’s dads!! I love moustache dad... his expressions are so cute and I love his line about how rude the city is for shooting him haha. The ending was really cute too, I love that Guts is bigger than both her dads. If she were to make herself big and push herself as far as she could each time, would she be able to reverse the effects of the shrinking I wonder? Your inks are nice and clean, but I wish there was a little more. There’s no line variation to denote distance, so the city looks kind of flat, and I think it could have done with some grey shading and more spot blacks. I’m still glad to see more Gutsmasher though
# 6
Posted:
Apr 8 2021, 09:56 PM
This comic brings pure joy to me, Gutsmasher’s interactions with both her boss and parents are excellent, and her dads are super cute!! Your inks are super clean and look great here too!
My only crit is on the speech bubbles; In some places I feel like the balloons could be tightened up. I really like the hand-drawn look they have but sometimes they leave quite a bit of white space around the text so I would recommend shrinking them a bit and making sure the text is centered in them! They also touch the panel border edges sometimes, which creates a couple tangents; having the bubbles get cut off a bit by the panel borders (like page 2 panel 6) looks good to me, it’s just when they’re barely touching the edge (like in the panel right before it) where it starts feeling like they could use some breathing room. Gutsmasher’s dads are the BEST I love them so much, the expressions are energetic and perfect, such a good comic!!
My only crit is on the speech bubbles; In some places I feel like the balloons could be tightened up. I really like the hand-drawn look they have but sometimes they leave quite a bit of white space around the text so I would recommend shrinking them a bit and making sure the text is centered in them! They also touch the panel border edges sometimes, which creates a couple tangents; having the bubbles get cut off a bit by the panel borders (like page 2 panel 6) looks good to me, it’s just when they’re barely touching the edge (like in the panel right before it) where it starts feeling like they could use some breathing room. Gutsmasher’s dads are the BEST I love them so much, the expressions are energetic and perfect, such a good comic!!
# 5
Posted:
Apr 8 2021, 12:39 AM
I love Gutsmasher! Her dads are so cute!
# 4
Posted:
Apr 4 2021, 05:58 AM
OH
my favorite!
my favorite!
# 3
Posted:
Apr 4 2021, 05:50 AM
Gutsmasher gutsmasher gutsmasher :eye:
# 2
Posted:
Apr 4 2021, 05:35 AM
YESSS!
I can't wait for this!
I can't wait for this!
# 1
Posted:
Apr 1 2021, 09:04 AM
Oh man! I can't wait to see what Gutsmasher has been getting into since Arma!!!
Paint me excited!!!
Paint me excited!!!
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Drawing Time:
1 week
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Apr 15th, 2021
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