Surveying The Damage / Colbitzer and Maddie the Mule

Surveying The Damage — Colbitzer and Maddie the Mule

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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
tags: astro sean, colbitzer, e.w. schneider, Eisensonne, gaiden, lovechild 2021, maddie the mule




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Footini
Artist
356 comments
# 12   Posted: Apr 1 2021, 09:26 PM
Hoo boy This is setting up some big things.
Hope Maddie gets out okay
no wait....

Platinumartist
Artist
141 comments
# 11   Posted: Apr 1 2021, 09:08 AM
This is a nice buffer and inbetween for your story here. I enjoyed it quite a bit and I like how you kept the same yellowish tone throughout to match your Lovechild Entries.

Flytee
Artist
307 comments
# 10   Posted: Apr 1 2021, 02:09 AM
I think this is a great companion story to lovechild - you fleshed out the world even more and established Colbitzers role in it. The writing is solid, even without context, I'd have no issues following the different beats of this scene and understanding what is going on...though admittedly the fact I do have context, does help with my emotional investment.
The art was pretty nice and suitably moody.  Great comic guys!

TheCydork
Artist
597 comments
# 9   Posted: Mar 30 2021, 02:48 AM
Hell yeah an interlude comic! It’s cool to see Colbitzer officially getting involved. Neat, solid little scene, honestly don’t have much to say beyond that haha good job guys.

ArtsandGoodies
Community Manager
566 comments
# 8   Posted: Mar 29 2021, 11:12 PM
This was a great middle story inbetween the two rounds of lovechild. fantastic comic all around.

Spirogs
Artist
26 comments
# 7   Posted: Mar 29 2021, 06:59 PM
Ha! What a cool way to get a character involved in the goings on of the moment.
I'm taking notes

Fluffsamasprime
Artist
436 comments
# 6   Posted: Mar 27 2021, 12:22 PM
This has gotten me quite pumped to see round 2 of Lovechild!
Loved seeing more Colbitzer, and even Yamato's corpse makes a surprise appearance.
My poor dead son

Lady Jade
Council
1167 comments
# 5   Posted: Mar 27 2021, 10:50 AM
"Level 5 Bakshi" is a very good joke. I absolutely love how Sean has jumped on this Lovechild storyline as a way to further his plans with Colbitzer, and this was a great read. I love Colby so much. I can't help but feel like this is building up round 2 of Lovechild to be even more about Clyde instead of about Maddie, but I'm trusting you guys to give us a good story regardless.

Sorry for the quick comment, this comic was just really good and I have no specific crits for now.

I found this comic very easy to follow, although I have read the recent comics including Clyde's return to Void BB and Lovechild round 1 so maybe if I wasn't paying any attention I would be confused.

snager
Artist
355 comments
# 4   Posted: Mar 27 2021, 09:54 AM
Quote from: InvaderDiz
what was happening.

the appeal/caveat of this site is to know what's going on, you have to read each character's backlog. also, a i just found out like 20 mins ago that most of Clyde's comics aren't even ON void, they're on DA? so i guess to really know what's going on, you have to be one of those deep-fans who follows all the artists on social media and stalks them in discord and on their other art hosting platforms.

but I think for this one, we could get away with reading two other colbitzer comics, the maddie comic and Clyde's intro.

reach within, to your local backlog, and you may find a friend and boi!

Sean
Approval Committee
382 comments
# 3   Posted: Mar 25 2021, 05:10 PM
Quote from: E.W. Schneider
If you haven't read Maddie vs. Yamato for Love Child Round 1, you probably should do that.

Quote from: InvaderDiz
This is really well done I just wish that I wasn’t so lost with what was happening. Though I’m pretty sure this takes place after round one of lovechild right?

This is the direct follow up comic to round one of Maddie's side for LCT.

InvaderDiz
Artist
86 comments
# 2   Posted: Mar 25 2021, 02:32 PM
This is really well done I just wish that I wasn’t so lost with what was happening. Though I’m pretty sure this takes place after round one of lovechild right?

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1070 comments
# 1   Posted: Mar 25 2021, 02:20 PM
For reference, Sean did the pencils and inks on this comic. I worked on the story, the layouts, the coloring, and some touch-up work.

If you haven't read Maddie vs. Yamato for Love Child Round 1, you probably should do that.

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