The Vicissitude of The Painted Lady / Veruca Chance

The Vicissitude of The Painted Lady / Veruca Chance

The Vicissitude of The Painted Lady — Veruca Chance

by Cab

This comic has been rated suitable for teens and up by its creator(s)

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neens
Approval Committee
263 comments
# 11   Posted: Jan 23 2021, 12:35 PM
I agree that it feels like you kinda set yourself up for a bad time here, and for no reason I can see? Hope to see some more complete work from you!

Cab
Artist
91 comments
# 10   Posted: Jan 21 2021, 10:44 PM
I apologize if that comment came off as malicious, it was not meant as such, it was meant of me trying to make best of a bad situation, its not meant to affect others and their growth, I apologize that might have rubbed you off in a negative way.

If you care to discuss this further my dms are open, we can harsh this out so there's no misunderstanding.

TheCydork
Artist
439 comments
# 9   Posted: Jan 21 2021, 08:36 PM
So first of all, having had a comic recently start off in the 40s range, I just wanna say it always sucks to see your work get low votes and I’m sorry you’re dealing with that. But I’m also wondering why you uploaded this when you seem pretty self-aware of how poorly received it would be, turn off crits but then comment things like “how low can the score go”? I don’t think you meant it in a malicious way, but it feels borderline taunting future voters and kinda rubs me the wrong way. Makes the choice of no crits feel less like a personal break, and more like an active refusal to grow.

Fluffsamasprime
Artist
148 comments
# 8   Posted: Jan 21 2021, 01:58 PM
I liked getting background for Lynch.
Feel bad for the poor girl with all she went through.

Pita
Think Tank
233 comments
# 7   Posted: Jan 21 2021, 09:42 AM
Good to know Lynch's backstory.

I'm not a fan of the ever-changing facial structures or exposition font.
It may benefit you to have someone look over your scripts and give gentle feedback.

Flytee
Artist
208 comments
# 6   Posted: Jan 21 2021, 06:35 AM
I appreciate the effort to flesh out an npc and introduce your readers to some deeper lore. I love the idea of building a vast, fruitful world around a character.

Looking forward to seeing you run with these ideas in future comics! More Lynch, please!





Footini
Artist
196 comments
# 5   Posted: Jan 20 2021, 11:38 PM
Really interested to see how Lynch will play more into Veruca's story proper.
Sets her up as a good foil for your hero and maybe even have Lynch incorporated more into battles.

Don
Global Moderator
166 comments
# 4   Posted: Jan 20 2021, 10:16 PM
This comic had alotta' fun ideas in it! Nice way to remind of about how this character is Veruca's rival and why she exists, and I've always been a fan of the "Unchosen One" trope. Brings in alotta questions— How easy it is to give/take away that role of descendance, and who is really speaking the true history behind all this. I look forward to seeing more of these concepts in your future comics, I'm pretty dang interested in how this'll all influence Veruca's story!

Cab
Artist
91 comments
# 3   Posted: Jan 20 2021, 09:26 PM
I wonder how low this score will go ? will it make it to the dreaded 30% range ?

Platinumartist
Artist
15 comments
# 2   Posted: Jan 19 2021, 11:57 PM
I can't wait to see more of the lore, it is always nice to see more of the backstory on Vercua's Backstory

Cab
Artist
91 comments
# 1   Posted: Jan 19 2021, 11:39 PM
I already know some folks aren't gonna enjoy how much text is in this tale and might not like the format I tried here, I wanted to experiment with this story, it might not be for everyone and that's okay, this was a story I been sitting on for over a year and just finally wanted to share it with the world, Thank you

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