Oh man, Klepp looks like he's lost it!
Can't wait for more!
THE RETURN / Klepp
Critiques & Comments
# 14
Posted:
Jan 24 2021, 04:20 PM
# 13
Posted:
Jan 23 2021, 02:20 AM
Pretty good panel composition, great pacing, genuinely scared of this little guy.
# 12
Posted:
Jan 21 2021, 11:34 AM
After sweeping the awards for Best of Void for 2020, Camel really going for all the categories for Best of Void this year XD
This is so punk rock. Just balls to the wall grisly and exciting. It's nuts that its only three pages but it already tells us so much. I love that you don't open with big explosions an impact panels, but you give us the aftermath. It kind of sets my imagination racing as to what Klepp pulled to inflict something like this. I love there's no explanation- you manage to show instead of tell and even then you manage to balance mystery with your reveal.
I'll reiterate Duels note for sound effects. I feel the stark results of the first page would've popped so much more with a thick 'THUNK" or impact soundbyte here just to drive the effect home. Still though. also a spooky metal sound effect of Klepp walking with the newfound boot would've worked. Still though [Chefs kiss] Keep hitting us with this rad sauce, bruh. I am loving it.
This is so punk rock. Just balls to the wall grisly and exciting. It's nuts that its only three pages but it already tells us so much. I love that you don't open with big explosions an impact panels, but you give us the aftermath. It kind of sets my imagination racing as to what Klepp pulled to inflict something like this. I love there's no explanation- you manage to show instead of tell and even then you manage to balance mystery with your reveal.
I'll reiterate Duels note for sound effects. I feel the stark results of the first page would've popped so much more with a thick 'THUNK" or impact soundbyte here just to drive the effect home. Still though. also a spooky metal sound effect of Klepp walking with the newfound boot would've worked. Still though [Chefs kiss] Keep hitting us with this rad sauce, bruh. I am loving it.
# 11
Posted:
Jan 20 2021, 06:26 PM
Klepp really went f the police here.
# 10
Posted:
Jan 20 2021, 02:53 PM
I am floored by how good this is. It’s very different from your usual so after being stunned by the first page I had to check again to see whose comic I was reading. I loved this a lot and what a direction Klepp is going in. I can’t wait to see more. Anything I could point out would feel like nitpicks but this was just great. I guess the only nitpick I’ll leave you with is I’d like to see you experiment more with sound effects. Otherwise, wow.
# 9
Posted:
Jan 20 2021, 04:56 AM
Everything here is so on point! The choice to only show the aftermath of the violence instead of some big gory scene was really cool- you left it to the reader's imagination which really amped up the horror in my own mind.
& then that final panel, it was so menacing, the red eyes gleaming in the shadows paired with Klepp's sinister smile and the sheer confidence of his pose- very menacing. Despite the fact he's surrounded by armed police, I don't like their chances.
& then that final panel, it was so menacing, the red eyes gleaming in the shadows paired with Klepp's sinister smile and the sheer confidence of his pose- very menacing. Despite the fact he's surrounded by armed police, I don't like their chances.
# 8
Posted:
Jan 20 2021, 12:06 AM
Dude this fucking gore man.... like you did this so well and I'm like "Thanks... I hate it" but in a good way.
The amount of detail you of for the blood and the tissues that are painted on the wall. Holey moly, everyone needs to watch out for Klepp.
Its good to see him back but it is scary to see what he is now capable now
The amount of detail you of for the blood and the tissues that are painted on the wall. Holey moly, everyone needs to watch out for Klepp.
Its good to see him back but it is scary to see what he is now capable now
# 7
Posted:
Jan 19 2021, 04:13 PM
I'm so fucking invested in Klepp's story omg 10/10 would get cut in half again
# 6
Posted:
Jan 19 2021, 01:53 PM
That was so brutal and so damn good!! The gore was delicious and the environment was amazing! Anything Klepp makes me immediately click, such a good character, and their corruption arc is one of the best I've seen. Great job!!
# 5
Posted:
Jan 19 2021, 06:44 AM
Ah yes, we need more Klepp! I have been invested in his story since Arma. This is very exciting.
# 4
Posted:
Jan 19 2021, 12:35 AM
guess who's back?
guess who's back?
guess who's back?
guess who's back?
Balalala Bala-bala
Balalala Bala-bala
Balalala Bala-bala
Klepp created his own monster
himself
guess who's back?
guess who's back?
guess who's back?
Balalala Bala-bala
Balalala Bala-bala
Balalala Bala-bala
Klepp created his own monster
himself
# 3
Posted:
Jan 18 2021, 11:30 PM
Really enjoyed this. Especially the first page, talk about an opener!
# 2
Posted:
Jan 18 2021, 06:08 PM
Damn. Klepp really went off the deep end. Visually this was really well done, the very last panel especially was so foreboding. I loved both Klepp’s single gold eye looking from the shadows of his hood, and the red eyes of his goons gleaming from the shadows behind. I wish there was more here though. You show us Klepp at a new stage in his arc, but I feel like there’s more questions brought up than answered. I wanna know how he got these minions, seeing as the last time we saw him was near dead and alone on a beach. Or how he even knew where to find a gold foot for the same side as his missing one. However I do understand not showing the significance/abilities of the foot, and I’m curious to see what comes of it in future comics!
# 1
Posted:
Jan 18 2021, 05:05 PM
Rated Adults Only for violence and gore
Drawing Time: | 1 week |
Ended: | Jan 25th, 2021 |
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