That said, I do agree with some of the crits about whether she went too easily or not, but I think it's more that there's a little "congestion" of ideas around where she meets her father. I think, with the way things are, you could have cut out the part where her father extends his hand, so it can read like the earth just opened up and swallowed her before Talon could do anything, and then when she sees him in Hell could be the first time he shows any tenderness on his face. The image of him solemnly extending a hand... the fact that it's repeated, I think, calls for a little "extra," like Lily slapping the hand away or something, only get swallowed up by hell, and then take the hand grudgingly as she does the second time it's offered to her. I also feel a little confused that she apparently (judging by the other comments) accepted, but was horrifyingly thrown down into hell the hard way anyway? The combination of those two opposites can work, but it probably could use a little extra.
I'm getting a little too long winded. You're really rocking the long scrolling style, and it especially fits a theme of "descent" and accepting one's inescapable fate. Those rich colors, the tar dress (instead of lava, tar! What an interesting shift!) really made this event a showstopper.
Sooooo.... is the next comic the wedding?

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I originally wrote a comment but my dumb butt clicked "submit votes" instead of "post comment," so the page refreshed and it was gone. [whine]
Basically: You rocked the scroll style, and I'm normally not a fan of the method but i really enjoyed this! The area in particular where there's ooze dripping into the next area was a delightful touch I had to examine for an extra pause. And the mood in the second half was delicious; I really felt the dread of acceptance. I don't have anything else to add that hasn't been said already, but I am absolutely looking forward to what demonic shenanigans Lilyfeather gets into!