Yooooo I really like this intro! Sigrid is such a funny little overcompensator, and her lines are really cute and funny. I like that you ended with a little mystery, like we don't know if she's actually kind hearted and not taking the souls, or if any number of things could be happening with the knight dude's soul (He's in purgatory and doesn't know, his soul might be contracted to go to her later, he might not have access to an afterlife, etc). Great job with this, excited to see where this character goes!

Thank you all for your comments and critics.
Glad you all liked Sigrid, the story will continue in her first fight vs. Rae and Blue!

I think that's the most apt description of Void City I've ever seen haha. I love the design of these two characters, and feel like the toony vibe is a breath of fresh air next to some of the grunge present in other comics these days. I'm looking forward to whatever you decide to do with them going forward!

As far as something to improve on, I think the main thing I'd like to see is just more details in your backgrounds. The kind of details you add are going to depend on whether you want to keep the cartoonish style or go more realistic, but either way, adding stuff like street lamps, pipes, more windows, trash, foliage, and other random bits you find in cities, as well as adding more variety to your terrains (hills, cliffs, bushes, etc.) would make your work stand out that much more. I can't wait to see what else you've got for us!

Congrats on getting her in, this was a fun intro with a good bit on intrigue into sigrid's history.

hm.
intriguing

Welcome to void!!
I really dig Sigrid's design, your art and writing style also has a really fun energy tooit! Let's fight sometimes!

Welcome to Void! Cute character who's about to steal everyone's souls in that god forsaken city but instead steals our hearts. Hah, can't wait to see Sigrid's (mis?)adventures.

Sigrid's a great character for Void, and I can't wait to see where she goes. Hopefully scar matches!

This intro comic has such promise of things to come. Just the right amount of comedy and tragedy for pique our interests. I can’t wait to see your first battle!

yesss another wizard for the wizard battle~!

the art style here is very professional grade. just some polishing with boarder placement and the help of a editor for syntax and spelling and you're pretty set! can't wait to see you grow and see where this character takes void city! i'm taking notes from you on how a good intro comic should go: the character's relation to the city is important!

I feel that the style used could be greatly improved with attention to stoke widths and smoother lines. It will come with practice-- but a sharper brush and a more sensitive stroke range could help.   As an example, the avatar looks extremely smooth but the actual comic feels like it's two post processing steps away from perfection.

I like the cartoony color and aspect of this Comic. This is one interesting duo and I really like the dynamic that has been established here. I'm super interested into seeing their adventures within Void City and which characters that they will be interacting with. I felt this comic ended in a good note and showed us a bit of who Sigrid is.

Congrats on getting in and I hope you have a Blast in Void City, just be careful on these streets, Mages an Spellcasters are always getting into trouble XD

YEEESS!!
That ending was so good! Perfect example of "show, don't tell"
Sigrid's overly-long attack names are so endearing and hilarious, really good intro. Can't wait to see more of these two!

Congrats on getting in!! I love this concept, there’s a lot of potential for both comedy and drama here, and I’m excited to see where it goes! Love the character designs too. Watch out for your punctuation though, a couple of sentences I felt were missing commas and ran on for a while.

I love her energy and delusions of grandeur, I can't wait to see more of her and what will happen when she runs into the other many magic folks here in Void City, welcome to the Site, I want more of her :-)

Heck yea new Wizard!
Sigrid looks like a fun new addition to void.
Now fight me wizard.

Congrats on getting in!
I read through her bio and can't wait to see more comics!
They're going to be so much fun!

i love themmmm ;_; honestly maybe its cuz i chugged through the manga recently, but this just gave me such softcore soul eater vibes, just shounen energies in general and i am COMPELTELY HERE FOR IT

looking forward to seeing more comics from you!!