admittedly the story itself fell a little flat for me. I think it was because it felt too much like Rabbit's dialogue was ripped straight from a hundred different animes with the whole "I can't believe you forgot me" plotline. I think, as a consequence, Rabbit felt like less of an actual character and more of a sort of stereotype? That said, though, I really liked the ending. Ripping out Rabbit's soul is such a brutal badass way to achieve annihilation lol.
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I guess I don't watch enough anime to know about the "I can't believe you forgot me" plot line, I didn't know that was an overused trope. Moa definitely remembers her, she's just pretending not to to hurt her feelings. If anyone is a stereotype, it's definitely Moa being a 2000's Mean Girl, and that's ok because that's the intention.
Thanks for the comments everyone, and especially to Will for accepting my THREAT. I wish you got to finish this up, you def did a better job of establishing a story than I did.
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Red- I love the cover for this, and the different angles that we got in this comic! I also really enjoyed the texture and the way you inked this. The soul-taking was a really nicely portrayed page!
Duel- I thought this was a really unique take on annihilation! Or maybe I just love the thought of absorbing a demon and gaining their powers? Either way! The way you portrayed was very interesting, and I'd like to see how you'd expand on the concept!