Dalarminus vs. GRiFFiN

Dalarminus vs. GRiFFiN

Dalarminus vs. GRiFFiN

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by madboy

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patayanknight
2 comments
# 29  
that was tight against dalarminus twin

Iketeruguy
Artist
220 comments
# 28  
Great coloring.  Great story telling.  One thing though, in my opinion you really need to lay down some inks.  I\'m all for the sketch lines, I think it looks cool.  But there were some panels where the line work was drowned out by the colors instead of being enhanced by them.  Everything else though was topnotch.  Great first entry!

madboy
Artist
93 comments
# 27  
escrima baby!!! wusup twins

patayanknight
2 comments
# 26  
yo this is twin.represent dog! . look like griffin know flip martial arts

SilverLimit
Artist
186 comments
# 25  
Man dude. EXCELLENT work. You\'re almost like the nexr Bacardi! Haha, look forward to seeing more from you!

sauceboy
Artist
99 comments
# 24  
jo, man...you are the man, dude!  crazy, off the hook.  i only hope my pages will receive half the attention yours got! ...well deserved, dude.....well done.  i always told you, you were the man.

madboy
Artist
93 comments
# 23  
yo c2j...can\'t wait to see your fighter up

madboy
Artist
93 comments
# 22  
first off...thanks for all the comments folks...especially the helpful crits...they can only help me get better in the long run...and i guess u guys can tell, i hate doing backgrounds...DOWN WITH THE FRICKIN BACKGOUNDS DAMNIT!!! only kiddin, i know i have to work on \'em...hey thanks again guys

Dingo
Artist
276 comments
# 21  
That comics just SCREAAAMMSS Dan!  I LOVED IT!!!!
Great job Madboy!!   >:3

So Dala, guess you didn't submit something after all...  (:P  Ah well, I'll be seeing stuff from you on Endless, so I'm not tooooo dissapointed  n_n;;

Pixelchop
Artist
139 comments
# 20  
Griffin that was hot... I love your character and the intro . And this fight just set it off. I am a friend of sauce boy so my character is kind of tied into his. Ill be on soon so I hope not to get embaraced too much. I even gave you and SB and cami. Just keep putting stuff up like this and your gonna kill em on here.... Cant wait to see more!!!!

Altowolf
4 comments
# 19  
For some reason I find the hair curler far more amusing than I should... *Doing!* it gets me every time.

 I really can't find anything I don't like... I even went through it again looking for things... if it were inked & cleaned up a little - that’s the only thing I could possibly think of.

Awesome work! I can't wait for more!

Phill
Artist
895 comments
# 18  
Heh, now that is one fine piece of ass (pun intended) Ha ha ha ha......... Ok that's enough of that... Too bad Dala didn't sumbit anything, oh well.

Griffin: Really like the bold sence of colors you use... though I think that some backgrounds are needed in certain panels (mainly the first one, it looks like he's at a field full of people instead of a city) but that's easily changed over time and no big deal if you ask me. Once again I love the colors used! You defenetly know how to make them blend with each other and the lighting and shading add to the mix as well.

I like the style of art you use, I really can't put my finger on it... but it sorta reminds me of what is normaly seen in Image comics, so I can't point out a single thing that needs changing. Hmmm... the panel in which you carve dala with your knife (not the bar BQ panel) looks kinda wonky due to the blood... personaly I'd make the blood darker in a way, that's the only thing I could think of... sorry.

I also love how you linked this comic to S.O.N.'s intro comic, which shows that you know how comics are put together, so you get points on that. Overall I'd say that you're one fighter I'm not too eager to fight ;) (yet ;) ) Just too bad Dala didn't submit. Keep it up or something?

Marley
Artist
259 comments
# 17  
JOE YOU\'RE SICK!!! SOOO AWESOME!! LOOK AT THOSE SHADES!! you beast! great first entry

sauceboy
Artist
99 comments
# 16  
i am BOOSTED!

madboy
Artist
93 comments
# 15  
thanks jar....comparing griff with bacardi...i don\'t know bout that but that means alot...i\'ll try my best not to disapoint

madboy
Artist
93 comments
# 14  
too bad dala retired...i didn\'t want to win this way but i\'ll take a W all the same...

jar
Artist
63 comments
# 13  
Sweet Job Griffin.

Is it just me...or does Griffin seem like he's going to be the next bacardi?  Cept, Grifs comic has humor :)  And a sweet job it is :)

Thanks for the comic hombre

madboy
Artist
93 comments
# 12  
thanks z

zombi
Artist
334 comments
# 11  
dude... madboy... that was one big can of whop ass
griffin looks hot in that apron
great coloring and style, great job man

i think dala has retired from this site...

;__;

madboy
Artist
93 comments
# 10  
hey dala...did u get an extention or something?...why isn\'t the battle up?

madboy
Artist
93 comments
# 9  
is dala really retired?  cause i spent alot of time and effort in this first match...if he's not retired then here's to a good battle.

madboy
Artist
93 comments
# 8  
need sleep...

sauceboy
Artist
99 comments
# 7  
Dalarminus....easy on the comments...I was just trying to pump up the battle...I\'m new here, so I\'m just excited!  I\'m anticipating some awesome battles to partake in.  Good luck in your battle......and I like the new look of your character.  peace.

Marley
Artist
259 comments
# 6  
shhhh dude guys... man dala has been bashed enough lately! Dala i hope for a good fight =) i know you can put in some good work!

can't wait to see your first battle joe =P

Dalarminus
Artist
38 comments
# 5  
i havnt been slacking off, my fights with dan glyph and veiden i couldnt complete cause i was juggling 3 jobs at once, tobias an latem fights were not submitted because molotov couldnt handle the fights at the time,  chao-one didnt bother to do anything for our fight so i said fukk it, and typo-demon\'s scanner broke so to be nice i didnt turn ion my fight which was done. now my seel fight is finished all be it that she said i could do it half ass\'d, and I am working on this fight so piss off

sauceboy
Artist
99 comments
# 4  
D...are you gonna post pages...cause you\'ve been slackin in the past.

Dalarminus
Artist
38 comments
# 3  
Calm down nut licker, wtf is ur problem?

sauceboy
Artist
99 comments
# 2  
YO, MAN...ARE YOU KIDDIN ME.  "DARLILAMA" HAS NO CHIZZANCE!
JOE. PLEASE DESTROY DAN...OOPS, I MEAN DALARDHOIS.

madboy
Artist
93 comments
# 1  
hey Dala...thanks for the welcome...good luck

FIGHT ON!!!

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