Eri vs Burnmeister / Eri

Eri vs Burnmeister / Eri

Eri vs Burnmeister — Eri

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snager
Artist
51 comments
# 8   Posted: Aug 15 2020, 09:54 PM
I like the painterly textures and mushiness you got going with some of your renderings a lot! and despite the unfinished-ness ( are some panels/text just missing?) I still felt like Burnmeister (bug guy) deserved to have the crap beat out of him. pretty believable circumstances to see a guy get his guts ripped out.~ I was rooting for Eri

yarnwitch
Artist
302 comments
# 7   Posted: Aug 14 2020, 05:01 PM
I really enjoyed this! I also didn't particularly mind the sketchiness of it cause it kind of gave it a raw feeling which worked a bit. That said, the HUGE width of the canvas made this a very frustrating read, but I liked it nonetheless! Eri seems like a lot of fun and I wanna see more of them!

Brobin_Dragon
Artist
33 comments
# 6   Posted: Aug 13 2020, 11:44 PM
Voted! I definitely found this entertaining, and gave me a "believable introduction" to the characters. I also like the obvious style of art you were going for(brushstrokes), and the panel shapes within the pages are interestingly dynamic. I would def keep the idea of it, but maybe have them either taking up the full page or having additional panels so that they there isn't so much blank space.

ArtsandGoodies
Community Manager
432 comments
# 5   Posted: Aug 13 2020, 02:25 PM
It's cool that you were able to do a comic, since even though it's unfinished you have had huge troubles getting any sort of comic stuff done so this is a good start. We talked about it already but I do think when you're ready for another battle decrease the scale masivley. you went to big and overwhelemed yourself with this, also you should reach out more for help about this stuff since yout end to just struggle in silence making less progress than you could. Just gotta keep moving forward and try again when you can. I do love Eri and your action in the finished parts is really nice

Symon_says
Artist
167 comments
# 4   Posted: Aug 13 2020, 02:01 PM
Happy to see a warm blooded character from you, Crocostyle. More Eri in the future please!

Happy September 18th! ACAB -Reecer6
Artist
303 comments
# 3   Posted: Aug 11 2020, 11:49 PM
i too do not understand why you decided to upload this partially completed but it honestly didn't bother me that much :V looking past the unfinished parts, i really liked this! a big part of this is admittedly the brush, which greatly compliments your style. but also, it's a great fight! the energy of it really comes through, you've got a ton of excellent posing, and burnmeister's role is very fun. i was super entertained.

TheCydork
Artist
261 comments
# 2   Posted: Aug 10 2020, 04:47 AM
Yeah... what Kozi said. The pages were also too big, making t even more difficult to read :( Of the panels I could see, the movement was great, and the monotone makes it feel really gritty. I think if you’d finished this, it would have been a really cool battle.

Kozispoon
Global Moderator
1111 comments
# 1   Posted: Aug 9 2020, 03:16 PM
Gosh this was a tough read. Most of what was depicted I couldn't make out due to the unfinished quality and as the pages progressed ,there was varying levels of sketchiness that even with the word bubbles, I couldn't make out what was going on. I'm puzzled because I'm aware you didn't meet the deadline of your battle due to not finishing your side, so with time on your side, I figured that meant submitting this as a BB would mean you'd taken the time to complete it. Please note beyond battles can be submitted at any time, so even if it takes a couple more weeks, you can always submit future comics with time enough to complete them on your own schedule. :)

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