Raise Some Hell! / Jamilia "JaJa" Rojas

Raise Some Hell! / Jamilia "JaJa" Rojas

Raise Some Hell! — Jamilia "JaJa" Rojas

by Footini

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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
tags: armageddon, 2020, armageddon 2020, jaja, jamilia "jaja" rojas




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Kozispoon
Global Moderator
1093 comments
# 11   Posted: Aug 4 2020, 07:40 PM
A great start to some hellish times at Voidmont high XD

I love the current rend of using unique color themes in your battles as of late, but I'll be real and say I'd love to see more love given to your inks. If only to grant some weight and variety in quality and width. As it stands its pretty scratchy and rough

snager
Artist
20 comments
# 10   Posted: Aug 4 2020, 11:17 AM
lol  'dog jail'

so is this the Salon des Refusés de femmes i've been hearing about?

Rivana
Artist
149 comments
# 9   Posted: Aug 3 2020, 11:43 AM
This is such a fun short comic to kick things off. Nice cameo by Dog Jail from your last comic! For a one day thing, this is such a feat.

kubo
Artist
102 comments
# 8   Posted: Aug 2 2020, 11:17 PM
I'm pretty stoked to see what you have in store for Hell Void City!!

Symon_says
Artist
147 comments
# 7   Posted: Aug 2 2020, 06:40 PM
So now Jaja has broken out of Dog Jail. That is going on her permanent record. Lol
Nice hype and event setting. Cool demon designs too.
What's next for this team of demon bashers?

Flutterbyes
Artist
273 comments
# 6   Posted: Aug 2 2020, 06:15 PM
I see my Ben! :D Thanks for including him in your Arma hype. I like your creative panel layouts, and very clear language that this is Jaja's show. I also love that she apparently got the attention of that monster she pointed at.

TheCydork
Artist
223 comments
# 5   Posted: Aug 2 2020, 05:47 PM
I love the panelling choices you made here! I’m a sucker for symmetry so seeing the diamond shape with the characters on each side, and then the blast on page 2 was super cool. Nice palette too, and great work for one day! I was also thrown by the characters though. Not by Sophie, but by Ben. You show us how several of your characters are preparing for Armageddon, and then Ben’s just there. Also why were all four of them breaking out of Dog Jail? Or were three of them supposed to be a rescue team for JaJa? It’s not very clear.

Heavenbat
Artist
121 comments
# 4   Posted: Aug 2 2020, 04:48 PM
Daaaamn, done in just one day? This is real good, you should totally do a 24 hour comic battle with Orion at some point!! I love the color palette you used, and this comic has just a really fun energy to it. Also I fuckin love JaJa lol.
I don't have anything really crit-wise that couldn't be fixed with just. More time spent on refining things, other than the fact that the big demon monster in page 1, while a cool visual, kind of confused me because it comes out of nowhere, isn't in any panels before or afterwards, so I'm left wondering if it's supposed to be symbolic? Was it there to look cool? Did they scare it off with their escape? Did they pass it by as they were falling? we just don't know! Love the panel compositions though!!

ArtsandGoodies
Community Manager
417 comments
# 3   Posted: Aug 2 2020, 01:15 PM
I really like how you're pushing your paneling still with this comic. Also your color choices and limited color pallets are really nice. There are still some things you need to work on with your draftsmanship. The main things that stick out to me is your anatomy lacks clear indications of the joints. I'm not just talking about the elbows and knees but stuff like the connection of the arm to the torso and the shoulder area (this is the first area I think you should take some time doing some serious studying of). You have been trying a bunch of new things and are starting to improve at a rapid rate so I hope you can keep it up since it can be hard but I believe in you.

Cab
Artist
52 comments
# 2   Posted: Aug 1 2020, 12:46 PM
Its great to see JaJa's new look i action, and I can see you're playing with the panelling, the lessons you learned from your mentorship is coming into play here. Keep up the good work my friend, my only real problem (which we spoke of before) is that I didn't really recognize that fourth member of Jaja's squad right away due to that character having shown only so briefly before, it took me out of the comic to think "who's this person with the oversize Cannon ?".  

Other than that it was a nice short quick intro for Arma' and I am curious to see what Jaja and her crew will do in this hellscape.

Footini
Artist
35 comments
# 1   Posted: Jul 30 2020, 08:26 PM
Okay so this was a comic I did real quick in a day.
Mostly to get on that early hype train to destroy Hunter and Gray.

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