Intro Story / Inez

Intro Story / Inez

Intro Story — Inez

by Juxta

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Flutterbyes
Artist
282 comments
# 13   Posted: Aug 2 2020, 05:58 PM
Right off the bat, you have a great chemistry established between these two. Even without going to read the bio, I'm already really interested in seeing how they got together, what's in it for the two of them, and more of how they get along. I look forward to seeing more!

Heavenbat
Artist
135 comments
# 12   Posted: Aug 2 2020, 05:28 PM
What a good intro comic for a truly interesting character concept!! I super enjoyed the whole comic, it was a fun and entertaining story that I could honestly see being either the start of a movie or a scene from a TV show. I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with Inez!!

Kozispoon
Global Moderator
1129 comments
# 11   Posted: Jul 31 2020, 11:23 PM
I know exactly who this character is and what their deal be and I couldn't ask for more of an intro comic. This is a character I am especially gonna keep an eye out for when it comes to your first battle.

ArtsandGoodies
Community Manager
461 comments
# 10   Posted: Jul 30 2020, 11:50 PM
Great Intro I really enjoyed both your writting and artwork in this. My only crit is that you should try experimenting with your shots more. While the individual compositions of each panel are good the majority of them are midshots or close ups. in your future comics you should try to do some much further out shots and ones with full bodies at interesting angles.

Rivana
Artist
204 comments
# 9   Posted: Jul 30 2020, 10:30 AM
Really amazing intro!  One of the best I've seen in this site. Both your artwork and story are impressive and I can't wait to see more of Inez. Hope you get your battle soon. It's gonna be great!

Symon_says
Artist
167 comments
# 8   Posted: Jul 29 2020, 02:55 PM
Techno-sorcery is for no good lazy smelly Humans. Nice intro! Your style is very pleasing and the character interactions were fun. Keep it up!

Camel
Artist
101 comments
# 7   Posted: Jul 28 2020, 09:14 PM
Great intro! Inez' character is established well and the dynamic between her and Molly was very funny. The palette is incredibly pleasant and naturalistic, especially in that beautiful shot of the car on page 3. It was a little hard to figure out what was happening with the demonstration of her powers, disabling the computer -  I had to go to the character information to piece it together, but that's a completely understandable oversight when you only have 4 pages to introduce a character. All in all, I'm excited to see her in battle!

TheCydork
Artist
311 comments
# 6   Posted: Jul 27 2020, 07:09 AM
Congrats on getting your first character in! I freaking LOVE Inez. I lovvveee the concept of spirits stuck in bodies they hate. This intro was excellent too. You showed us exactly what Inez was about and the situation with Molly, the artwork was great too, I can’t believe you’re new to comics tbh.

Also FIGHT ME

Fluffsamasprime
Artist
65 comments
# 5   Posted: Jul 26 2020, 03:23 PM
I can't wait to see more of Inez! The personality stands out.
This is a top notch intro!

PutridVodka
Artist
47 comments
# 4   Posted: Jul 26 2020, 03:20 PM
I'm so amazed by this character! SUPER excited to see what Inez will get into next!
Loved her mean personality! And that part with the reflection showing her true form?? Pure gold!
Looking forward to more Inez in the future!!

Juxta
Artist
7 comments
# 3   Posted: Jul 26 2020, 02:36 PM
Hi everyone! What a scary and exciting time ^^;! I just wanted to say that I still consider myself a novice in comics so ANY comments and constructive critiques will be GREATLY appreciated.

I also wanted to thank the amazing staff and community in void for assisting and motivating me in the process of creating my first character/intro comic. Y'all are the best!

Footini
Artist
85 comments
# 2   Posted: Jul 26 2020, 02:27 PM
Congratulations on your first Void character!
I look forward to seeing your work in the future.

Heathen
Artist
405 comments
# 1   Posted: Jul 26 2020, 02:24 PM
Great intro! I only had one problem, which was page 3, I don't think you quite pulled off "person putting on a shirt and jacket in a car". Panel 3 looks like she's struggling against tiny seatbelt straps, it took me several seconds to understand that was just the pattern on her jacket, and then I had to flip back a page to see what she was wearing before.

Other than that, pretty good stuff. Good car. Great storytelling with Molly's wardrobe and acting, the blood on the bumper, the reflection in the shop window. Can't wait to see what you do next.

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