Dance into Hell / Black Swan

Dance into Hell / Black Swan

Dance into Hell — Black Swan

by JCee

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7spadesofsins
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# 13   Posted: Aug 11 2020, 11:43 PM
Your coloring is great especially the transitioning from beginning to end as others said along with both your line work and anatomy! Expression too! A lot of intensity from the eyes and mouth, especially the way she is gritting her teeth as she bashed that fellow! You can feel all those rage emitting from her and every punch she pulled. I like how conflicted Swan is, from reading your previous comics. I love how there is time, she is learning to no longer RUN from it, be brave and gain strength to face it. Trauma is a very hard, life-changing and challenging deal to go through. I can see how you portray her struggling through it, sometimes have relapse of it or like in your NSFW comic, making perhaps bad decisions to bury it...the audience can see how deep of a character Swan is. Makes her more human, I like how you push boundaries psychology-wise and giving character more depth and relation to her. Maybe after the Armageddon event ends, she’ll have the confidence to finally face  Remy and put her trauma behind?! Superb work, cannot wait to see what happens next!

Kozispoon
Global Moderator
1129 comments
# 12   Posted: Aug 4 2020, 07:43 PM
This festering need for revenge manifest in Swan being a BEAST in the ring is such a captivating story journey for this character. I love that you're not afraid to write a character who has a temper and isn't perfect despite outward appearances saying otherwise. Pasca's got some demons and I'm not just talking Arma. I really can't wait to see where she goes next.

snager
Artist
61 comments
# 11   Posted: Aug 4 2020, 11:59 AM
Love how you fill in blank space with mark-making, but still leave us visual contrast which helps lead us around with the action. :thinking emoji: there sure are a lot of comics coming out right now that have a fire and brimstone theme at the end?

Rivana
Artist
191 comments
# 10   Posted: Aug 3 2020, 11:47 AM
Gorgeous art as always and the color contrast between blue and orange is very nice. You're so good at expressions and action scenes too . I really felt the intensity of those punches on her opponent. ow

And Swan, despite the trauma that she is battling from within, is still a hero at heart. Gotta admire her tenacity here.

Heavenbat
Artist
135 comments
# 9   Posted: Aug 2 2020, 10:38 PM
Poor Swan... I really hope she gets to face her demons... while fighting demons, lol. You do a good job of showing Swan's trauma, but never feeling overly repetitive with it, which I enjoy. And this was a nice tie-in to Arma; really gives you that sense of "oh no, this poor girl never gets a break"

TheCydork
Artist
302 comments
# 8   Posted: Aug 2 2020, 09:06 PM
Honestly, I wasn’t able to pick out the old art aside from I think once or twice? It all still holds up very well. I especially like the change in colour palette from that bluish grey to orange and red as Swan leaves the subway and into a Hell-torn Void.

Symon_says
Artist
167 comments
# 7   Posted: Aug 2 2020, 06:44 PM
Accent into Hell.
Black Swan is on the scene! Nice tie-in. Your use of colors is well put.
Can feel her sanity slipping.

ArtsandGoodies
Community Manager
456 comments
# 6   Posted: Aug 2 2020, 03:02 PM
Your art is some of my favorite on the site and that is both because of your amazing line art and your limited colors making it pop even more. How you switch from primarly one color to another is fantastic and this is some published quality level stuff.

Stormcrow
Artist
68 comments
# 5   Posted: Aug 1 2020, 05:58 AM
*screams* I LOVE YOU SWAN I HOPE YOU'RE A DEFENDER

Rikun
Artist
98 comments
# 4   Posted: Jul 30 2020, 10:56 PM
It's great to see more comics from you! I hope you're doing well and I wish you the best of luck in Arma, defender or not.

kubo
Artist
105 comments
# 3   Posted: Jul 30 2020, 10:45 PM
I love this: it establishes where Swan is in her life right before hell is brought to Void. Whether or not she is a Defender, it will be exciting to see what she does in this nightmare landscape.

Rivana
Artist
191 comments
# 2   Posted: Jul 30 2020, 06:39 AM
I can't wait to read this! Swan is one of my faves!

JCee
Artist
385 comments
# 1   Posted: Jul 30 2020, 03:40 AM
Uploaded!

I've been working on and revising much of it since last year, but either forgot about it or lost interest and energy. Much of it is fairly old art, which is why some parts look different to each other and also why I have set it to no critiques for this one. I felt it would've been a shame to leave this on the shelf completely, and with Arma around the corner I thought now would be a good time to finally bring this to light.

Hope you guys like it.

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