HELLLLLLL NO / Ancelin

HELLLLLLL NO / Ancelin

HELLLLLLL NO — Ancelin

by Bobo

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Bobo
Web Dev
974 comments
# 16   Posted: Sep 11 2020, 10:07 AM
Thanks for all the crits and replies! You have very good points about the exterior design not quite being Ancelin's aesthetic, and I think it came down to a lack of imagination on my part. Definitely something I'll keep in mind with any future surprises the mall might have in store!

Heavenbat
Artist
135 comments
# 15   Posted: Sep 7 2020, 01:33 AM
Honestly just about everyone has said what I was thinking; a short but sweet comic, with a complete concise storyline, and I LOVE that Ancelin had such a different (and entirely reasonable lol) reaction to literal Hell on Earth showing up. I think I will echo though that the exterior design of the mall shuttle felt... weirdly dissonant to the interior decor. The patchwork-looking hull gives a very slapdash look, which doesn't seem to fit with Ancelin's whole aesthetic. I get that it was probably to convey durability, but I think you could've probably gotten away with making it look a bit more elegant and leaving its durability up to the reader's inference. That said, tech/mecha design is hard and I honestly don't know how I'd go about making it more elegant XD

Bobo
Web Dev
974 comments
# 14   Posted: Aug 27 2020, 10:40 AM
Kozispoon: When Ancelin watches Wild Wild West she DEFINITELY got ideas  XD

I am loving all these 'welp, gotta deal with Arma!' comics that have come out and this is no exception. This really sets the stage for what kinda wacky affluent void denizen Ancelin is just yeeting out with her egg mall. Considering her penchant for style and excess, I expected the spider mall to be more fashionable, but maybe she's in the Steven Jobs camp- less is more?

I loved your 'going extra' with animating the alert system panel. The change up of colors and direction of highlights and shadows was really neat. I know you posted in discord for anatomy and posing advice and I don't remember if you got feedback, but there is still some stiff wonkiness to Ancelin operating her mall spider. Also that poor neck is so so thin.
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I ended up sort of pushing that pose through just so I could finish the comic, but yeah, it could have been better and Taylor gave me lots of good advice. I think I need to practice some figure drawing to get used to how bodies move again. Also I will die for Ancelin's pencil neck XD

Kozispoon
Global Moderator
1129 comments
# 13   Posted: Aug 25 2020, 12:50 PM
When Ancelin watches Wild Wild West she DEFINITELY got ideas  XD

I am loving all these 'welp, gotta deal with Arma!' comics that have come out and this is no exception. This really sets the stage for what kinda wacky affluent void denizen Ancelin is just yeeting out with her egg mall. Considering her penchant for style and excess, I expected the spider mall to be more fashionable, but maybe she's in the Steven Jobs camp- less is more?

I loved your 'going extra' with animating the alert system panel. The change up of colors and direction of highlights and shadows was really neat. I know you posted in discord for anatomy and posing advice and I don't remember if you got feedback, but there is still some stiff wonkiness to Ancelin operating her mall spider. Also that poor neck is so so thin.

Bobo
Web Dev
974 comments
# 12   Posted: Aug 25 2020, 12:44 PM
Thanks for all the feedback everyone! I'm glad people enjoyed it ;A;

snager: I love the comic, but i love your thumbnails, more. does that Bosche character represent the mall, walking off with the patrons safely inside while chaos unfolds? that's deep, bro.
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Honestly I just liked that face and that painting overall is crazy, but I kind of like your interpretation better XD

Flytee
Artist
151 comments
# 11   Posted: Aug 25 2020, 05:20 AM
That was a lot of fun- those shoppers don't know how lucky they are!
Ancelin seems pretty cool, I love her blunt attitude...great fashion sense too.

snager
Artist
61 comments
# 10   Posted: Aug 24 2020, 11:00 PM
I love the comic, but i love your thumbnails, more. does that Bosche character represent the mall, walking off with the patrons safely inside while chaos unfolds? that's deep, bro.

Symon_says
Artist
167 comments
# 9   Posted: Aug 19 2020, 08:18 PM
So cool Bobo! That mallbilization took me by surprise. I love how loose and stylized your work has become!

Ancelin made a good choice here. Nice thumbnails too, Hieronymus' hell.

PutridVodka
Artist
47 comments
# 8   Posted: Aug 19 2020, 12:11 AM
OOOHH the animated light effects on the panels was SUCH A GOOD TOUCH!!
This was very fun to read!!

TheCydork
Artist
303 comments
# 7   Posted: Aug 18 2020, 06:33 PM
Ahahaha omg. I love that while everyone else is dealing with the chaos in one way or another, Ancelin just nopes with her entire fucking mall. Incredible. It’s also strangely cute, just a little egg on legs. Can’t think of any critiques, this was just a fun short comic!

Shen
Artist
1322 comments
# 6   Posted: Aug 18 2020, 02:08 PM
LMAOOOO ANCELIN JUST FUCKED RIGHT OFF XD XD I loved the animation!

Sean
Approval Committee
359 comments
# 5   Posted: Aug 18 2020, 07:44 AM
Mmmm I love me some Bobo comics!

Short and sweet! We get a good gist of the environment and setting right out the gate and the characters "fight or flight" decision. I like that you filled the mall with people and its not some weird empty area too. I have noticed a majority of us on void tend to forget to fill the streets of the city with people. I'd say try a little more variation in your linework, while I love how everything is bold and pops, the variation would be beneficial to showing off what's in the foreground of the panel to help focus the eye! All around I think this was a solid comic.

I missed Ancelin! Let's battle soon!

Footini
Artist
80 comments
# 4   Posted: Aug 17 2020, 08:22 PM
Ancelin is a mood and that last panel had me ugly laugh.

It's short but I was impressed with the colors and animated lighting.

yarnwitch
Artist
302 comments
# 3   Posted: Aug 14 2020, 05:03 PM
ANCELIN HYPE SQUAD, I might be a little late, but I am NO LESS HYPE!!!!!!!!

Rikun
Artist
99 comments
# 2   Posted: Jul 24 2020, 05:49 PM
Ooooo!!! Love seeing more Ancelin!!!

Footini
Artist
80 comments
# 1   Posted: Jul 24 2020, 05:37 PM
Heeeeelllllll YEA!!!

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Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Aug 24th, 2020
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