I agree with arts, that resizing would be a good thing to keep in mind in the future.
Anyways- I really like the limited colors you were using, it makes the pages very striking! I'm excited to see how you'll use this character in future battles!
Intro Story / Killer
Critiques & Comments
# 7
Posted:
May 30 2020, 10:18 PM
# 6
Posted:
May 30 2020, 02:00 AM
Weeeell I love straightforward characters! I think this is pretty nicely executed. a little chaotic art in places but i think you´ll improve on composition and color choices over time. Nothing big to complain on right now.
I am a little confused about the red font text. you stated he talks to himself but that reads more like a shizophrenic trait.
All in all i am looking forward to see him in action.
I am a little confused about the red font text. you stated he talks to himself but that reads more like a shizophrenic trait.
All in all i am looking forward to see him in action.
# 5
Posted:
May 29 2020, 08:33 PM
Woohoo zombie Killer, sever the head or destroy the brain, good luck against the un-living hordes! I do hope Killer's armor holds up against tooth and claw in search of that cure.
Keep it up saucysiracha, and welcome!
Keep it up saucysiracha, and welcome!
# 4
Posted:
May 29 2020, 07:51 PM
Hey! Welcome to Void and congrats on getting your first character in! His design is intriguing, I love the idea that he isn’t an actual medieval knight and just kind of perceives himself to be, with a literal rubbish outfit.
I agree with Riv in that warm colours, especially the dark red, were a good choice here and fit the vibe well. However Killer himself is also in similar tones and doesn’t pop from the background. I would suggest adjusting the lighting. It probably would have emphasised his goal and views better if the light was shining directly on him for instance, as well as making him stand out. Like some holy light shining down on him.
I agree with Riv in that warm colours, especially the dark red, were a good choice here and fit the vibe well. However Killer himself is also in similar tones and doesn’t pop from the background. I would suggest adjusting the lighting. It probably would have emphasised his goal and views better if the light was shining directly on him for instance, as well as making him stand out. Like some holy light shining down on him.
# 3
Posted:
May 29 2020, 06:24 PM
Welcome to VOid and can't wait to see you fighting with this zombie killer knight, vagabond, dude, killer guy.
# 2
Posted:
May 29 2020, 06:19 PM
Hey grats on getting him in! I'd have to agree with Arts on the comic dimensions. It's too big and I wasn't able to appreciate much of the layout. 1000 px wide is ideal.
I especially love your choice of colors. They go together well and are in harmony. Zombie/Virus themed characters are also always a plus for me because I love that genre. You did throw a bit of a wrench to it by dressing him up like a medieval knight and that makes it even more interesting.
I hope we see more of him in Void. I am looking forward to watching him interact with the other characters which are just as unique (or crazy) as himself.
I especially love your choice of colors. They go together well and are in harmony. Zombie/Virus themed characters are also always a plus for me because I love that genre. You did throw a bit of a wrench to it by dressing him up like a medieval knight and that makes it even more interesting.
I hope we see more of him in Void. I am looking forward to watching him interact with the other characters which are just as unique (or crazy) as himself.
# 1
Posted:
May 28 2020, 01:28 PM
congrats on getting him in. I made a full crit on the approval email but another thing i wanted to add is in the bio you mentioned him maniacally laughing a bunch but wasn't in this comic. Also when submitting to void make sure to save a sized down version with a width of 1000px. more than that and it looks a view weird on the site forcing a side scroll.
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