great stuff Rtv!....sorry I wasn\'t able to finish my entry...I know it looks pretty crappy but I thought it was better to post what I had than nothing at all

Oh i like i said i really love the anatomy and that choke hold on the second page was my idea too, lol. Executed very well.

Thanx man. Yeah i might tone it down a bit. Lately i been in the extreme with disortion, like an obsession lol.

Wei, sorry about your obstructions but i'm glad you still turned something in. I can't stop staring at your anatomy work and i bet that if you had more time it turn out great. It was nice doing this again!
I don't mind a third...unless you're tired of it, i'd understand.
Whenever you have time, holla

Rtv - You're an insance pencilist, first and foremost... but along with the extreme angles you use, you frequently distort the characters features.  In this battle Su's face looks really weird on page two panel two, and page three panel five.  Other than that, this is the best body work I've seen from you.

The only other problem I have is the story-telling.  You like using a lot of action, but sometimes that works against you by using so much action it becomes hard to follow.  It may have something to do with the size of your panels... if you used smaller panels, and more of them, it may become easier to follow, and you'd be able to work in even more action.  See Crazy Samurai's fight for an excellent example, or Priest published by Toykopop... dude works in MAD action into a highly intelligent story.

Mjolinir - Your entry looks rushed - not much happening, pencils not entirely finished (Su's hand on page one), and the severe smudges on all the pages.  All in all, good pencil work, but backgrounds were desperately needed. Page two could have been physically larger to make it clearer what was happening.

It's a good effort especially with the restraints you mentioned in the forum, but I'm hoping for a better show in the future from you.

Rtv! I\'m gonna start this off right where it left off and it\'s gonna be b+w.....so we should be on even ground....\'cept you got more talent and I\'m more popular with the ladies