Great Escalations, Round 1 / Avie Lanche vs. Streid

Great Escalations, Round 1 / Avie Lanche vs. Streid

Great Escalations, Round 1 — Avie Lanche vs. Streid

by Julz

Icon for Avie Lanche54.6%
520 points
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Crit level: No critique desired, comments encouraged

Icon for Streid45.4%
433 points
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Crit level: No critique desired, comments encouraged

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# 10   Posted: Apr 23 2020, 06:56 AM
Julz - Oh I love your style and palette! Even though Avie is in a terrible situation, the battle was strangely cute. I like how you drew Streid and your interpretation of him in general, it was fun and I really got the jester vibes hard. The spinning head was a great touch.

Nifty - Ah, I wish there was more of this done! I feel like there isn't much to comment on since it's all so sketchy. You appeared to have some cool perspectives going on though, and Streid seems like a fun character! Really hope to see more of him in the future.

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# 9   Posted: Apr 21 2020, 10:57 PM
Julz: I love the color choices you did for this comic, they're very pleasant on the eye and making it really nice to read. Also Avie's inner monologue is funny to read though sometimes a bit on the exposition side, but you add enough of her personality to make it not feel like that much. Great job with the comic.

Nifty:Your pencils and the way you laid out the action here was really awesome. If you feel bad about having an incomplete comic you can take your time to fully ink it and color it and resubmit that version as a Beyond battle. I would love to see that since your character is also awesome.

# 8   Posted: Apr 21 2020, 08:04 AM
Julz - your artwork is gorgeous and the color palette is just really pretty! I love how you made creative use of Streid's ability here.

FeelinNifty - I see so much good potential in these sketches. Shame you weren't able to finish them! Hope to see more from you next time.

# 7   Posted: Apr 18 2020, 06:44 PM
A demon with Kamina glasses and a fireax hidden off to the side. XD that's some silly stuff and I loved it. I like this funny demon world, and the edgy narration from the main character cracked me up a little. Good stuff.

I really like how creative and awesome looking some of these shots are. Also the puppet guy's dialogue was really good. It's too bad we didn't get to see the characters fight or interact very much with each other, but what we did get to see was great.

# 6   Posted: Apr 16 2020, 03:05 PM
A pair joined in gladiatorial hell!

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Interesting situation that your dragon dame has found herself trapped in. The internal dialogue is a neat quirk. On page two, panel six, Avie has no feet. Or. Very pointy ones? It was minor but worth noticing. Ice dragon ice breath would have been cool, but maybe in the future, no? Love the style though! Good work!

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This was a nice little introduction. Clearly the order of which Streid associates are high class individuals. Would have been ideal to whiteness his abilities in action against this interloper,  but time is of the essence. You did great work portraying your opponent but I feel you may want to practice Streid's form a little more. Hope to see more of your work! Take care

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# 5   Posted: Apr 16 2020, 08:25 AM
I see you kept your word, and the googly-eyes stayed.  Couldn't be more proud.  Avie's internal dialog is absolutely choice with how Done she seems to be of this whole arrangement.  Keep those sour levels up!

You had a couple of good action shots here, especially when Streid kicked down the door.  That's certainly one way to make an impression on visiting dignitaries.

# 4   Posted: Apr 16 2020, 07:06 AM
Good work guys, despite the difficulties you face you submitted something, shame you couldn’t complete yours Nifty!

July, you know I love it! Also I’m glad to see the Easter Egg was kept! :D

# 3   Posted: Apr 16 2020, 12:28 AM
Yeah,  I kinda dropped the ball on this one. Ran out of time to do everything I wanted. I'm also sorry!

# 2   Posted: Apr 12 2020, 08:36 AM
submitted, wont have time to finish later so i rushed it sorry folks. I gotta get stuff together for a new job that involves travel.

# 1   Posted: Apr 1 2020, 12:28 AM
Sad space dragon VS Asshole clown

Oh no.

Comic Details -

Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Apr 22nd, 2020
Votes Cast: 25
Page Views: 563
Winner: Julz

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