Work Work Work! / Gutsmasher

Work Work Work! / Gutsmasher

Work Work Work! — Gutsmasher


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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
tags: Beyond Battle, gutsmasher, jolokia, rae and blue




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Heavenbat
Artist
113 comments
# 16   Posted: Mar 30 2020, 02:07 PM
I love Guts so much. Just. SO MUCH she's the best. I love the way you do expressions and I love the little details you put in (like Guts' Nopalito shirt!) my only suggestion would be to maybe add a few more of those little interesting details to some of the bgs? Like the little chairs on the roof in the first panel! Mostly, in the street/alleyway, it feels really barren--the first panel of page 2 has some good lil details but then the other panels the details kinda disappear.

Other than that though, all I have to say is I love this comic so much :D Rae makes such a fun foil for Guts

Flytee
Artist
126 comments
# 15   Posted: Mar 26 2020, 03:21 AM
@cy @rhino
re- lack of context for Rae working at the pizza place.
Just a heads up Petrichor made this comic a while ago. Originally it was going to be posted after I put up "Soul and Flesh part 2" which would have shown Rae being hired right at the end, and given this comic context.
Obviously I prematurely ended my comic so the wholesome ending I had planned never happened. Its  100% my bad!

We're in a battle right now, my side will give some context to all this :)

Petrichor this is excellent, you know how much I love your art. I'm super excited to have our characters interact some more~!  

TheCydork
Artist
198 comments
# 14   Posted: Mar 26 2020, 01:40 AM
Cute little comic! I love Gutsmasher and her enthusiasm for everything, I’m curious to see what kind of interactions we’ll get between her and Rae, I think they’ll play off each other well! I do wish I had a little more background on why Rae is working for Rensga though, from recent comics I don’t see where or when she got hired?

CandycornRhino
Artist
58 comments
# 13   Posted: Mar 26 2020, 01:38 AM
Hah, this was such a cute comic. I like the dynamic of the characters 'tween the excited Gutsy, the adorable Blu and the lethargic Rae. Cool to see some development with Gutsy and the pizza restaurant, but maybe a segment showing how Rae/Blu got hired to the restaurant would've been more cohesive. I almost missed that detail with it that detailed being delivered through one dialogue bubble.

ArtsandGoodies
Community Manager
400 comments
# 12   Posted: Mar 25 2020, 10:05 PM
Very cute comic. I love the way you draw gutsmashers hands and kind of want to draw most of my anthros with hands like that with the claws at the ends. I'm curious how you sketch out your hands and would like to know your process for them.

OberGoat
Artist
43 comments
# 11   Posted: Mar 25 2020, 01:27 PM
Well... I was.. uh... just making sure you were paying attention?

Yeah, I somehow missed that entirely, so, retract previous nitpick.

Petrichor
Artist
38 comments
# 10   Posted: Mar 25 2020, 12:34 PM
Rivana and OberGoat:
The boss does yells Rae's name in the first page. it's the first thing he says XD

OberGoat
Artist
43 comments
# 9   Posted: Mar 25 2020, 11:23 AM
Just an all around good comic, I love your expressions and sense of motion your characters have, like when Gutsy is holding Rae or when boss man is pulling the sheet off the scooters.

There are a couple grammatical errors, (Which happen to the best of us) I think about my only minor gripe would be to agree with Rivana that Rae probably should have been referred to by name at some point, but this is just a minor nitpick that in no way takes away from the story.

All in all great work! I'm looking forward to seeing the future misadventures of Gutsmasher!

BoogidiBzdo
Artist
50 comments
# 8   Posted: Mar 24 2020, 10:40 AM
I saw that wee cameo - Thank you SO much! It means the planet to me when I see these things. :):):)

Rivana
Artist
129 comments
# 7   Posted: Mar 23 2020, 08:59 AM
I love this comic! Very entertaining and the art is so clean  and crisp. Only one thing is  that Rae's name  wasn't mentioned anywhere and if someone would read this without context, they'd be confused who the blue-haired girl was.

Oh and I want pizza now!

Shen
Artist
1303 comments
# 6   Posted: Mar 22 2020, 03:26 PM
i love gutsmasher so much and this little glimpse into the next stage of her life, also lmaooooo poor Rae RIP
no crits just love

Enef
Artist
58 comments
# 5   Posted: Mar 20 2020, 10:18 AM
Petrichor: @enef
Ugh sorry for that. I could swear everything was alright with the text this time...
Thanks for letting me know. It won't happen again
(and thanks for the compliments! ^^)
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Hey! No worries, Keep on doing you! If you're ever not sure gimme a shout and I'll help you out :)

Petrichor
Artist
38 comments
# 4   Posted: Mar 20 2020, 06:54 AM
@enef
Ugh sorry for that. I could swear everything was alright with the text this time...
Thanks for letting me know. It won't happen again
(and thanks for the compliments! ^^)

Radji
Artist
543 comments
# 3   Posted: Mar 20 2020, 03:38 AM
that's one one wholsesome feel good comic like I like 'em. Void's chaos need soem more love

Enef
Artist
58 comments
# 2   Posted: Mar 20 2020, 02:53 AM
The comic is great, Petri! Good work! My main critique here would be to get someone to proof read your text, I love it and it’s cute but occasionally some of the English is a little off! If you ever need help (English isn’t your first language right?) feel free to ask! I’ll always be happy to help you!

Artwork wise it looks fantastic, keep up the good work, I love Gutsmasher and Rae <3

Petrichor
Artist
38 comments
# 1   Posted: Mar 19 2020, 06:19 PM
The events here happen a month after Flytee's "Soul and Flesh part 2"!
Rae started working in the pizzeria after she broke out of Hendrix's enclosure. Now she has being laying low/recovering after being imprisoned by the cult :c (flytee's words)

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