Intro Story / Cairo Rae

Intro Story / Cairo Rae

Intro Story — Cairo Rae

by Golden


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TheCydork
Artist
130 comments
# 11   Posted: Mar 26 2020, 01:00 AM
Really great intro! Tight writing, shows the whole premise of the character. You’re very good at using a monotone palette, everything read clearly to me despite mostly being in black and white. Art-wise I basically have no crits!

I do agree with Arts though in that his method for picking a victim seemed a little haphazard. From this intro I get the impression Cairo has done this many times before, yet he picks someone in the audience who came with somebody else? Surely that’s the opposite, that guy’s partner is gonna realise immediately that the guy never came home from the show. I notice he grabbed her arm so I’m guessing this was to imply an abusive relationship, but still. To assume someone in that position wouldn’t report a missing partner seems like a dangerous game for someone who’s supposed to be experienced.

ArtsandGoodies
Global Moderator
358 comments
# 10   Posted: Mar 25 2020, 08:57 PM
Great comic. I love limited colors and your inks are awesome. The only minor thing is I was wondering how he noticed those two were having an argument and assumed no one would miss him becuase of that. but that is a very minor thing for this great introduction.

Rivana
Artist
75 comments
# 9   Posted: Mar 22 2020, 06:55 AM
Great art and comic as always Goldie! I am hitlisting this character =D

Badger
Artist
39 comments
# 8   Posted: Mar 20 2020, 06:38 PM
Ahh I just love his whole premise, magic and werewolves, two things I greatly enjoy hahah your art is fantastic as always and I'm especially a fan of the paneling on page 3! The chop at the bottom of the page and then bringing it back at the end as the execution, it's good stuff. Fight me someday pls

Radji
Artist
542 comments
# 7   Posted: Mar 20 2020, 03:39 AM
OUI.

Heavenbat
Artist
99 comments
# 6   Posted: Mar 19 2020, 02:48 PM
O dang what a good introduction to this character!

Hellis
Artist
226 comments
# 5   Posted: Mar 19 2020, 02:21 AM
Exellent stuff! The pacing for this was fantastic, I am very intrigued by a flashy showmanship focused werewolf magician.

Kozispoon
Global Moderator
1077 comments
# 4   Posted: Mar 18 2020, 09:34 PM
TA DAA!

CandycornRhino
Artist
34 comments
# 3   Posted: Mar 18 2020, 09:24 PM
I AUDIBLY GASPED AT THE LAST PAGE ITS THAT GOOD.

JCee
Artist
371 comments
# 2   Posted: Mar 18 2020, 08:06 PM
YAAAAAASSSSS

Shen
Global Moderator
1299 comments
# 1   Posted: Mar 18 2020, 07:55 PM
HES HERE HES HERE!!

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