Retribution: Released On Good Behavior / Colbitzer

Retribution: Released On Good Behavior / Colbitzer

Retribution: Released On Good Behavior — Colbitzer

by Sean


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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques




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Bobo
Web Dev
926 comments
# 15   Posted: Feb 21 2020, 05:04 PM
This is better than anything I've seen from you yet! You did a great job creating atmosphere here, and the colors you picked were perfect for each scene. I hate this guy and can't wait to see more of him! XD

Flytee
Artist
120 comments
# 14   Posted: Feb 14 2020, 03:53 AM
Really enjoyable, I love the ton of this comic and the muddy, grungy use of colour. Colbitzer's interesting, i'm excited to see a completely unhinged character run riot.

Overal this was a really solid comic, great job!

Now on to my rather pedantic and nitpicky crit. Just some stuff to consider.

-I think the furry character should have been more noticeable in that first page, he ends up being quite a big part of this story, but he's really easy to miss at the start. Really hammering in that there's now an anthro on the police force would have made the ending more impactful.
-I also personally would have had the van hit a deer or hog, basically something visually more distinct from the anthro character. It would stop things from visually getting muddled. Because the wolf anthro is kinda easy to miss on that first page, I could totally see a reader thinking Colbitzer is hallucinating that the wolf is a police officer or something at the end. xD
- Colbitzer's face has already been shown by the time we get to the last page, so I wasn't sure why you decided to suddenly chose to hide it. Personally I would have liked to have seen his expression during such an intense scene.


ArtsandGoodies
Community Manager
387 comments
# 13   Posted: Feb 13 2020, 08:17 PM
I love limited color and I love these heavy inks. I was a little confused what happened to the guys in the back and why Colbitzer is the only one is fine or how he got the card, but this is still an awesome grusome comic. Great job on the leap to digital.

Kozispoon
Global Moderator
1080 comments
# 12   Posted: Feb 13 2020, 04:03 PM
A long anticipated welcome to one supah bad guy. I cannot WAIT to fight this guy. >:D

Hellis
Artist
226 comments
# 11   Posted: Feb 13 2020, 03:20 PM
Jesus fuck, when did you get this good?

Thats it, Thats the entire comment.

Symon_says
Artist
95 comments
# 10   Posted: Feb 13 2020, 12:02 PM
Very nice spooky grungy ambience with the darks. Poor lone wolf just looking for a pal, too bad that guard wolf got eyeballed. Can't wait to see where this vigilante heads next

Shen
Global Moderator
1301 comments
# 9   Posted: Feb 12 2020, 03:33 PM
damn dude i know youre used to traditionals but your digital art is SICK. This is some good old fashioned grit and gore, a welcome sight! I admit it took me two reads to get- since we never get a very clear look at anyone's face, I didn't immediately recognize which one was Colbitzer and got all turned around. But I got it on the second pass so its probably on me. LOVE the pale blues and reds and the whole vibe. Excited for more!

Flutterbyes
Artist
254 comments
# 8   Posted: Feb 10 2020, 06:38 PM
:O Oh my. This is... tactile, moody, an gruesome. It has an almost analog/nostalgic feel to it that's different from your other comics (the use of textures without skewing them does throw this factor off though). I'm... still left pretty confused. The third panel on page 4 for a while confused me, because I thought Colbitzer was looming over the wolf man, who I thought was the one escaping from the police wagon at first, because the visual continuity was a little messy there.

All the same, I'm on the edge of my seat, eating my popcorn.

Energy
Artist
128 comments
# 7   Posted: Feb 10 2020, 04:39 PM
Yikes!  The brutality!  This is going to be fun to see where this guy goes next.

Camel
Artist
84 comments
# 6   Posted: Feb 8 2020, 03:02 AM
My BOY!! Always glad to see more comics from you. The move to completely digital has already done wonders to your spot blacks, your palette and overall comic clarity. That second page shot of the wolf is totally badass! Can't wait to see what you do with this tough fucker!

Fluffsamasprime
Artist
2 comments
# 5   Posted: Feb 8 2020, 01:15 AM
The grittyness and violence are really well done!
This is going to be an entertaining character to hate.
Cant wait to see more!

Heathen
Artist
350 comments
# 4   Posted: Feb 7 2020, 04:44 PM
Finally! This intro came out great, man! I too dig the color work here, and the dialog gives the right amount of backstory to who Colbitzer is. Can’t wait to see his first battle, and looking forward to fighting him myself!

Sean
Approval Committee
325 comments
# 3   Posted: Feb 7 2020, 02:42 PM
I just want to make note that this is my first ever fully digital comic. I recently transitioned from traditional to digital and I’m pretty proud of this. So I hope y’all hate this character but enjoy the comic. Fight me, cowards

Radji
Artist
542 comments
# 2   Posted: Feb 7 2020, 12:55 PM
I already love that pile of human trash

CandycornRhino
Artist
55 comments
# 1   Posted: Feb 7 2020, 12:29 PM
Good behavior MY ASS.

Gotta say, this is a well made intro comic for someone like Colbitzer. I really like the washed color palette, looks almost watercolor-y, and I really dig the inking style that melds into the darker shadows. Gave a good clear indication on what kinda person he is without showing too much directly, and leaves it up to mystery on how he was indicted in the first place. I may have a few guesses, big thonk.

Grats on getting him in, looking forward to seeing more, and my Dino-guy kicking his ass >:D

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Ended: Feb 14th, 2020
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